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Bronzing of Trees

Silhouette of trees dressed in chiffon prints Oaks, pines, maples tossing their hair I trail along their rumba curve way down to where glazed bushes nestle. Above roasted sail of Laguna River crossing a moat...today, foliage begins to seethe on flamed leaves amidst summer’s embrace, as more timber follow a float where mauve petals kiss the air. The bronzing of glens and wheezing of mist reach a coaled ember of summer fire, cluster of moments drapes veined trunk with sniff of earthy scent, reminding me how lush the branches swell against heat of August ‘s coals when two pairs of arms brush the stars with paint of reveries. Warm the meeting of palms fondling the barks In a dizzy sketch of romance, and then, Like a curl of ambrosial boughs in rumba dips, Trees hold passion’s charade, until... Charlotte Puddifoot's Vibrant Verse 2 Contest - new poem

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Date: 8/9/2014 11:54:00 AM
This is just delightful ~ very creative ~ And I loved it. God bless you with inspirations to keep writing beautiful works like this one. Love and Hugs.
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Date: 8/9/2014 4:02:00 AM
'Oaks, pines, maples tossing their hair'...'Warm the meeting of palms fondling the barks' etc. I could go on and on here...Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order here my friend! - Tim
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:59:00 PM
Simply stunning Nette, congratulations. I just love your writing.
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:16:00 AM
Nette galing galing!>. :) deLightdul wonderful images .. :) CONGRATULATIONS AND MABUHAY KA!!!.
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:43:00 PM
Once again, Nette, a beautiful dance of words. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:39:00 PM
This is magnificent, Nette. big congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:56:00 PM
Nette, huge congratulations for your great well-deserved TOP win! Awesome imagery -just a beautiful write! Warmest regards! pandita
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:48:00 PM
A perfect winning piece...hugs
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Date: 8/7/2014 10:11:00 AM
Few can paint such a gorgeous scene such as this, truly beautiful and shimmering with sheen! Love it !!
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Date: 8/7/2014 9:31:00 AM
I love the images in the poem. Congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 8/7/2014 7:13:00 AM
Nette, I read this to the trees and they blushed. Great job.
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations... Linda
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:05:00 AM
Hi Nette! I stand in awe and bow to your incredible pen! I keep reading this beauty over and over again...and it goes to my favs. Yes, it is vibrant with richness of images and colours. I love it. // paul
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Date: 8/7/2014 4:55:00 AM
nette, what can I say that I haven't said a hundred times before? I'll be accused of favouritism soon if I keep placing you first! incredible images, great manipulating and bending of language from first word to last...congrats on your top win in my contest! :)
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Date: 7/31/2014 2:59:00 PM
Stunning images penned, sweet friend!... Hugs, dear Nette.. Arlene
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Date: 7/30/2014 4:05:00 PM
What a great talent you are. this is incredible , and just stunning. A true piece of art. take care, Pete.
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Date: 7/30/2014 10:57:00 AM
- Nette, the whole poem is: "a dizzy sketch of romance" - Beautiful! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/29/2014 11:41:00 PM
Unique work here! Great imagery - like nothing I have seen before! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/29/2014 11:52:00 AM
A very splendid write my very dear friend Nette. I love your poem so much and its vibrant image. Thank u so much for sharing! Kudos as always! I hope and pray that you are doin well! Sending u many lovely hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 7/29/2014 9:55:00 AM
Monterey said it right...you are a word painter...and you know I love anything about trees...:) Hope you are doing great, Nette
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Date: 7/29/2014 8:31:00 AM
Your ability to paint breathless images and leave the reader stunned is beyond compare.
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:58:00 AM
Nette, you have a unique style all your own that leaves the reader without breath! I love the beauty and the wonder!
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Date: 7/28/2014 5:37:00 PM
Such lovely imagery nette...You make nature coma alive....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:52:00 AM
Oh that is such a beautiful images Nette! very well said!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:12:00 AM
Very lovely and vivid images you write out........I like it. So many clever and interesting descriptions in your poem, very inspiring. I really enjoyed reading it!
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