Bronzing of Trees

Silhouette of trees dressed in chiffon prints
Oaks, pines, maples tossing  their hair
I trail along their rumba curve
way down to where glazed bushes nestle.
Above roasted sail of Laguna River
crossing a moat...today, foliage begins to seethe
on flamed leaves amidst summer’s  embrace,
as  more timber follow a  float
where mauve petals kiss the air.

The bronzing of glens and wheezing of mist
reach a coaled ember of summer fire,
cluster of moments drapes veined trunk
with sniff of earthy scent, reminding me
how lush the branches swell against heat
of August ‘s coals when two pairs of arms
brush the stars with paint of reveries.
Warm the meeting of palms fondling the barks
In a dizzy sketch of romance, and then,
Like a curl of ambrosial boughs in rumba dips,

Trees hold passion’s charade, until...



Charlotte Puddifoot's  Vibrant Verse 2 Contest
- new poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcintosh Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:54 AM
This is just delightful ~ very creative ~ And I loved it. God bless you with inspirations to keep writing beautiful works like this one. Love and Hugs.
Ryerson Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 4:02 AM
'Oaks, pines, maples tossing their hair'...'Warm the meeting of palms fondling the barks' etc. I could go on and on here...Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order here my friend! - Tim
Trichet Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Simply stunning Nette, congratulations. I just love your writing.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:16 AM
Nette galing galing!>. :) deLightdul wonderful images .. :) CONGRATULATIONS AND MABUHAY KA!!!.
Gibson Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Once again, Nette, a beautiful dance of words. Congratulations on your win.
Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 6:39 PM
This is magnificent, Nette. big congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sietesantos Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Nette, huge congratulations for your great well-deserved TOP win! Awesome imagery -just a beautiful write! Warmest regards! pandita
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 3:48 PM
A perfect winning piece...hugs
Richards Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Few can paint such a gorgeous scene such as this, truly beautiful and shimmering with sheen! Love it !!
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 9:31 AM
I love the images in the poem. Congrats on the win, nette
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Nette, I read this to the trees and they blushed. Great job.
A   Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations... Linda
Callus Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Hi Nette! I stand in awe and bow to your incredible pen! I keep reading this beauty over and over again...and it goes to my favs. Yes, it is vibrant with richness of images and colours. I love it. // paul
Puddifoot Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 4:55 AM
nette, what can I say that I haven't said a hundred times before? I'll be accused of favouritism soon if I keep placing you first! incredible images, great manipulating and bending of language from first word to last...congrats on your top win in my contest! :)
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Stunning images penned, sweet friend!... Hugs, dear Nette.. Arlene
Dome Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:05 PM
What a great talent you are. this is incredible , and just stunning. A true piece of art. take care, Pete.
Andresen Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 10:57 AM
- Nette, the whole poem is: "a dizzy sketch of romance" - Beautiful! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Unique work here! Great imagery - like nothing I have seen before! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Gasun Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 11:52 AM
A very splendid write my very dear friend Nette. I love your poem so much and its vibrant image. Thank u so much for sharing! Kudos as always! I hope and pray that you are doin well! Sending u many lovely hugs! love lots, Leonora
Hunter Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Monterey said it right...you are a word painter...and you know I love anything about trees...:) Hope you are doing great, Nette
Sirak Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Your ability to paint breathless images and leave the reader stunned is beyond compare.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:58 AM
Nette, you have a unique style all your own that leaves the reader without breath! I love the beauty and the wonder!
Smith Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Such lovely imagery nette...You make nature coma alive....hugs Tim
Nance Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Oh that is such a beautiful images Nette! very well said!!
Christensen Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Very lovely and vivid images you write out........I like it. So many clever and interesting descriptions in your poem, very inspiring. I really enjoyed reading it!
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