Bronwyn's Mate, Part Ii

To Hellie's credit, she had rightly judged...
for, all told- the young man was quite shady
so from her guard-post she would not be budged
for she was most loyal to her lady

And when he cooed and whined to survey
Bronwyn's hide-out with treasures galore
(and blinded by love, the lady obeyed)
Hellie let out a terrible roar!

Before he could pilfer a single rare item
our Hellie put Beau on the run
snapping and snarling, she'd viciously bite him
her fun had only begun

He squealed sissy screams and kicked out at her
but she got the better of him
he called her a “hideous, scurrilous cur”
she pursued him with vigor and vim

Rapidly round all the high piles of loot
she chased him with eyes bright and shiny
while he scuffled (and occasionally gave her the boot)
and she snapped at his delicate hiney

At length, he shot out of the mouth of the cave
in a desperate dash to break free
but he'd nowhere to go- and wasn't quite brave
so he threw himself into the sea

As Bronwyn looked down with an irritated frown
(she was actually becoming quite peeved)
old Hellion beamed up, and drooled on her gown
her ultimate mission achieved

Her lady turned to face her, and warmly embraced her
while Hellie soaked it up with a smirk
soft fingers stroking and fluffing her fur
for dispatching the devious jerk

They spied the poor devil as he met his sad fate-
and they watched from their perch high above
a bold pirate queen and her canine first mate
the next-best thing to true love!

____

This is the swashbuckling sequel to my "Barefoot Buccaneer" poem... ;D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/15/2019 11:59:00 PM
So much fun to read! Well done!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 7/16/2019 12:05:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend! ;)
Date: 7/6/2019 5:04:00 AM
Ah, a pirate queen who knows what to do and is not afraid to do it! Adore this one. "He squealed sissy screams and kicked out at her but she got the better of him he called her a “hideous, scurrilous cur” she pursued him with vigor and vim " Your rhymes made me smile all the way through!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 7/6/2019 11:28:00 PM
I grinned all the way through as I wrote it, knowing you would get a kick out of this adventure! ;)
Date: 6/25/2019 5:57:00 PM
Of course! Great story; cute read.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 6/25/2019 8:35:00 PM
Thank you!! ;)
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