Bronte Inspiration 4 - Specially Written For Tim Smith

TO FULLY UNDERSTAND THIS POEM PLEASE READ BRONTE INSPIRATION 1, 2 and 3 


Little Patrick in the nursery playing with his toys 
Asks ''MUM'' can I have a sister like the other girls and boy ?
His friends have told him in playschool about their expanding families
Our little boy wants a sibling and we are only too happy to please 
With every waking moment , we climb those Bronte stairs 
Or get cosy on the sofa, the foot stools and easy chairs 
We felt that we had tried so hard and we had little left to give
The doctor told us that our test had come back positive 

We are so very blessed Patrick’s a lovely little boy
He looks just like his daddy; he is our pride and joy
Despite the fact he’s young and only just aged three
He is so excited at the expected addition to the family
Only yesterday he brought me his favourite teddy
Put it in the nursery for when the time is ready
He would love a sister and has chosen a lovely name
I’ve told him to be patient we must play the waiting game.

Patrick often cuddles up and touches your tummy 
Says ' I can feel her growing inside you mummy '
His much loved chicken nuggets he shares with you 
Come on mum , you know you've got to eat for two 
We giggle as Patrick’s patience grows shorter
I'm just hoping that we have a beautiful daughter 
He wants a sister with every ounce of his heart 
I'm praying that we can do our part.

The time for the birth is now drawing near
With you by my side I have nothing to fear
Patrick is due to stay with his little friend 
To keep him amused on them we depend
Finally the waters break and the baby is on it way
We hurry to the hospital we have waited for this day
At last the baby arrives she has such a lovely face
Patrick’s name is so apt for her, so we have named her Grace

We take care to involve our son in all we try to do 
Taking every opportunity to inspire hearts and minds a new 
Our children have their moments and sometimes they misbehave 
With love and careful guidance, we have a million memories to save 
So many children's giggles and demonstrations of love and care
We give thanks to God for the happiness we share
We've ensured the Bronte house is a happy love filled place
A sanctuary of our own for our children Patrick and Grace

13th June 2014
Written by Jan Allison & Darren Watson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/22/2014 6:39:00 PM
hmmm, I know I have read at least some of the saga earlier. I think this one stands on its own whether you have read the earlier ones or not, and it is a very sweet poem relating the importance of including the child in the new baby's upcoming arrival. Well done, you two.
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Date: 6/23/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Andrea of the four Bronte poems it is my favourite for that very reason unity as a family which sadly is so lacking in many relationships these days. Am just so lucky to have Darren as my cyber husband :-)Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/17/2014 5:11:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed the story all the way to the end..A baby adds so much to a home..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2014 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Sara not sure if Bronte 5 will ever materialise but will never say never:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Date: 6/16/2014 10:32:00 PM
This is very beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 6/17/2014 1:06:00 AM
Aww thanks so much Lucilla. I do hope you have read the other 3 Bronte poems we have written together. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
Date: 6/13/2014 1:29:00 PM
Oh wow, this brought tears to my eyes,,,oh you two are amazing..many hugs :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 1:34:00 PM
Oh Casarah you say the most lovely things to inspire us - Tim suggested we have baby number two and Darren was happy to oblige lol. Hugs as ever Jan xx
Date: 6/13/2014 12:55:00 PM
How wonderful...my little soap opera is back and better than ever. Can't wait to find out what happens next...I was glued to the screen finding out Patrick got his wish...Bravo my friends and thanks for the writing it for me...You have made my day...many smiles Tim :)
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Date: 8/25/2015 4:48:00 PM
Amazing to think it has taken a year for Bronte 5 to be penned Tim but i cant wipe the grin off my face with the sheer joy of writing with Darren once again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2014 1:09:00 PM
Oh Darren doesn't need any encouragement in the bedroom department Tim he was happy to rise to the challenge for this poem LOL. Bronte 5 - ohhh may be divorce next ... watch this space :-) Thanks for being the first to comment Tim - means the world to us. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
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