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In the beginning it was not so. Adam and Eve were perfect when God’s created them. Their interaction with each other reflected the perfection of the relationship between Father, Son and Holy Spirit. They, like us were created with freedom of choice and could choose whether to follow God’s plan for their lives, or go their own way. When tempted by Satan, they chose to follow his suggestion and disobey God. That act of disobedience fractured their relationship with God and with each other, and resulted in the brokenness that we experience today. Adam and Eve hid from God after their disobedience. This is the first evidence of Brokenness. We hide or try to hide our wrongdoing because we are Broken. Confronted with his disobedience, Adam and Eve resorted to blame. He blamed God, she blamed the serpent. Ever wondered why we are inclined to blame others for our mistakes. It’s because we are Broken. Many children are abandoned by one or sometimes both parents, who themselves were abandoned by one or both of their parents. The result is brokenness. Divorce, substance abuse, prostitution, sexual promiscuity, lesbianism, homosexuality, bisexuality, low self-esteem, pleasure-seeking, lying, cheating, stealing, killing, and a myriad other dysfunctions are symptoms of humanity’s Brokenness. Where do we find help for our Brokenness? It begins with a choice. We know from experience that to keep our cars running well we need to follow the instructions in the Owner’s Manual. Follow the instructions and your car runs well and you get to enjoy it for a long time. Ignore the instructions and your car will finally break down and leave you stranded. The choice is yours. After this Brokenness invaded God’s plans for a perfect life for his creatures, he devised a plan to combat our Brokenness and finally effect humanity’s healing and restoration. Like cars, we have a Maker and he has provided us with an Owner’s Manual, called the Bible. Read it and become familiar with God’s plan for our healing and restoration. By following his instructions, we can mitigate the effects of our Brokenness. When we ignore his instructions, we experience break down in one or many areas of life. The choice is ours. Healing and Restoration or Brokenness.

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Date: 2/24/2022 12:12:00 PM
You cover everything in your beautiful verse. An inspiring Christian msg. Love, Anaya
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Date: 2/24/2022 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for checking out another one of my poems and commenting. I truly appreciate you taking the time to do this. I try to write on subjects that are real to my audience and that not others are not addressing.
Date: 5/27/2021 5:55:00 PM
Wonderful summary of the salvation message. Very Biblical! Thanks for this, David!
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Date: 5/18/2021 7:05:00 AM
Beautifully written piece, David! Amen.
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Date: 5/15/2021 9:56:00 AM
iT'S an honor to read your poetry of truth. Perfect salvation message, AMEN.
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Date: 3/6/2019 2:23:00 PM
True words, David..our brokenness (sin) came through rebellion to God’s perfect plan for us. Thank God He is merciful and gave us a way of escape by believing in Christ and His atonement for our sins on the cross! God bless! :)
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