Brokenly In Love

After all these years we're still remain.
In love with each other day by day.
Ups and downs have came in our way.
Storm and chaos we both regain.

So many pieces of brokenheart.
We still gather and make them intact.
We almost lost the love we'd found.
thought that will find it to somebody's arms.

But thank you for the broken heart.
Thank you for the pain and scars.
Those are the reason why I survive.
You're still the meaning of this life.

Call me crazy ,call me blind.
Shoot the bullet,hit my heart.
No one can tell me, I'm a masochist.
I am in love, a feeling I can't resist.

If this is wrong,I'm willing to risk.
'Cause love can't always be perfect.
No matter how many times we fall.
It's still you and me after all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/19/2014 9:56:00 PM
Aiyah Such a truthful and powerful write. Love can have its ups and downs but through it all our hearts seek that one true love for eternity. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Single Mom poem.
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Date: 2/14/2014 11:11:00 PM
Hello Aiyah, it's okay to take the risk. How else will we accomplish another broken heart. I'm just saying, cause no matter how many times we fall, we land perfectly in the arms of love all over again. A great write, ... How I wish Love was perfect..... Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 3:21:00 AM
you were right ,Linda...thank you for dropping by and leaving me with a wonderful comment like this! ..you are so loved with so many people...glad i'm one of them..Happy Heart's day again!!! ..:>__<
Date: 2/14/2014 8:43:00 AM
Nice poem, well reflecting your love for him, as you have told me. Keep writing, it is important. [I made a few suggestions on the poem and sent you an email.]
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/14/2014 1:24:00 PM
thank you, Jim...Happy Valentines Day!!! >)__<
Date: 2/13/2014 2:51:00 PM
This is so lovely and true..I am glad that you stuck with it....Tim
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Date: 2/13/2014 3:17:00 PM
thanks, Tim!!! ..glad that you liked it.. >__<
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