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Broken-Hearted Watching Helplessly

His arms wrapped around her frail body, cradling her gently as he feels the warm sickness. Her hair clings about her sweat-soaked face as a fever burns with raging anger. A need of wet snow, to cool her brow to break the fever, he refuses to let her die. A fear within him sets, knowing she will soon die. She is his heart; he wants and needs her to survive. He holds on to her for dear life against his chest watching helplessly as the woman he has loved is dying. In his arms she lays still and quiet, her breath leaving her body to leave the world behind. 10/13/2017 Contest Name: Broken-Hearted Poems Sponsored By: Broken Wings
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Congrats!
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Eve, congratulations on your podium win for this beautiful, but so heartbreaking, poem. Well done! Hugs, Sandra
Moorman Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Eve, I am so pleased to see your winning poem in first place. How very deserving for one so talented.
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Eve - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
La France Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Eve, congratulations on your first place win in my contest with this sad, sad write !
Callus Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Beautiful sadness, Eve...very touching! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Congrats Eve--well deserved top win!
Pett Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, this certainly pulled at the heart strings, so well written.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this heart wrenching write. The reader can feel his pain.
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Hi Eve, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win in the "Broken Hearted Poem "contest :-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Wow! Eve, You have penned pure heartache. I could feel the pain in this write. You nailed it. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:48 PM
ohh, painfully beautiful, eve... this was masterfully done... huggs
Duffy Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Wow, that is powerful. A beautiful piece of writing.
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Full of sorrow--well written--best for a win, Eve!
Sivey Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:39 AM
Oh this one is truly heart breaking my friend! Oh I feel this one deep into my heart, as I have felt like this before! Not quite the same exactly, but when I lost my grandmother, whom I was very close to, I felt the loss completely...and I watched her pass away before my eyes, I was with her until the end, she didn't die alone! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! What a fabulous piece, truly spectacular, Great Work!!
Ashley Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:58 PM
A very heart-breaking and helpless situation indeed Eve to watch your love's life slip away before your eyes... Great sad story-telling, beautifully done! Good luck in the contest!
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