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Holding Charlie, who was 19 years old, 1990 

Broken-Hearted Over You


For twenty years, he was my joy
   a member of our family...
      A living thing, my precious toy
with heart of gold, eyes just for me.

A stray he was midst fire debris.
   For twenty years, he was my joy;
      was rescued and brought home to be
my loving cat...a mama's boy.

My chin he'd stroke, so sweet and coy
   each night when he curled up to sleep.
      For twenty years, he was my joy;
at dawn, my cheek, he'd gently sweep.

That day did come to break my heart.
   My dear, sweet Charlie, precious boy,
      at our vet's office, we would part...
for twenty years, he was my joy.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: Broken-Hearted Poems
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 10/16/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Emotional and truly heartbreaking, Sandra. I can relate to this....had to have our Snowball put down at a ripe age to spare him unnecessary pain. Congratulations on your fine and merited win. Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thank you, Paul, for your visit and supportive comments and congrats. Yes...our pets are so very special...Sandra
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Sandra - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Thank you very much, Gregory. Sandra
La France Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 1:32 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad, sad write, oh I know this pain too well, sweet Charlie rest in peace !
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thank you once again, Constance, for your wonderful contest and my fine placement. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Wonderful write, Sandra, our pets are our family. Congratulations on your win hugs Eve!
Haight Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Thank you, Eve, for your nice comment and congrats. Yes, our Charlie was special. Hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Hi Sandra, To lose a pet is heartbreaking. I can relate. My heart broke when my dog got hit by a car. Congratulations on your placement in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest ". It was well deserved- Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 10:15 PM
A pet of so many years surely breaks one’s heart!
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, Kim, for your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Full of emotion and sorrow--very apt for this contest--best for a win, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Thank you, Vijay, for your encouraging comment. Sandra
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