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Broken Wing

Looking back on my past The years have flown by so very fast. Being with a boy who i thought was the 1 Having a baby so very young. Thats when my nightmares really started, But didn't want my little family parted Trying hard to make this work, But how can i when he is such a jerk. He was acting more like a baby I was crying out for something to save me. Battered bruised verbally abused Laying crying feeling used. Till one day i finally snapped, I walked out that door didn't look back Couldn't believe i had just dun it Hes the fool and looks the Muppet Im so much stronger than ever before and life just got better from closing that door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/15/2017 8:45:00 AM
Hi Lisa, very sad and powerful write, I see this in my job every day :)
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Date: 4/11/2017 4:30:00 PM
Lisa, Thank you for sharing this powerful piece that sounds very real. Yeah for you for walking out that door and never looking back!:) Amitiés
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Lisa Costigan
Date: 4/12/2017 6:35:00 PM
Thank you for your comments and feedback it was very much real and from a negative came a positive and my now 21 year old son who is my rock
Date: 4/10/2017 11:21:00 AM
Beautiful. Really like the finishing line. "life just got better from closing that door". Inspiring piece, powerful message too. You have my vote. Thanks for sharing
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Lisa Costigan
Date: 4/10/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you for taking time to read and review ;-)

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