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Broken Wing

A poem is like a bird with a broken wing Kneeling down, with gentle hands, i gathered up an injured soul, to mend its wing, so it can fly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/22/2009 6:51:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:38:00 PM
What a creative view captured in this concise poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I enjoyed it. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 9:38:00 AM
Gregory, Your words are golden. Congratulations on having your insightful poem featured this week. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 8/18/2009 7:11:00 AM
Writing poetry does help heal our souls! Great poem. Krista
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Date: 8/17/2009 5:04:00 AM
This is exceptional piece that is featured. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gregory. Love Carol
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Date: 8/16/2009 9:49:00 PM
Just beautiful, Gregory. There are these metaphores that make you FEEL and you are a real poet behind them. Just beautiful! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 8/16/2009 9:47:00 PM
Just beautiful, Gregory. There are these metaphores that make you FEEL and you are a real poet behind them. Just beautiful! Love, Iolanda
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