Hugo Sarvida Jr. Poet Free verse

Broken Vow

The stars won't shown tonight
The world is closed
In pitch darkness
The day you broke me.

The flowers in the field
Is gloomy to my eyes
Uninviting, disturbing
The day you quit.

The sunset turn red
A bloody beauty to me
Angry feeling creep in
Since the day you left.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Darlene De Beaulieu September 28, 2024 at 2:56 PM Hello Hugo, A lot of hurt feelings here. I wonder why she left. much love here. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu September 29, 2024 at 8:59 AM Hello Hugo, I am glad your daughter has moved on. One day she will meet the right one for her. Much love /Darlene/ Hugo Sarvida Jr. September 28, 2024 at 6:49 PM This poem is for my daughter, remember she broke the boy who is already betrothed, she really love him, anyway, she got moved on now. Thanks, Darlene for the concerned. Love and care./Hugo.