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Broken Vow

The stars won't shown tonight The world is closed In pitch darkness The day you broke me. The flowers in the field Is gloomy to my eyes Uninviting, disturbing The day you quit. The sunset turn red A bloody beauty to me Angry feeling creep in Since the day you left.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/28/2024 2:56:00 PM

Hello Hugo, A lot of hurt feelings here. I wonder why she left. much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2024 8:59:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I am glad your daughter has moved on. One day she will meet the right one for her. Much love /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 9/28/2024 6:49:00 PM

This poem is for my daughter, remember she broke the boy who is already betrothed, she really love him, anyway, she got moved on now. Thanks, Darlene for the concerned. Love and care./Hugo.