Broken Valentine

Teeny tiny crack seeps rose droplets,
              Glistens
Her love siphoned heart gasps for adrenaline.
            Shh...Listen
      Once  christened
Rarely granted permission to beat loudly
              Fractured
        Broken valentine,
         Please wake up!
              Be mine?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 19, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Robin. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
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