Broken Unbrellas

Broken Umbrellas by Mike Lee

as the
red fire sun
nibbles away
the pink ends of the day
my last thoughts
will be of you
you 
with your 
tinny 
white
ankles
dipped 
in 
a blood red
rain
and
your
broken
blue umbrella
fighting 
the wind
like a caged
matador
under
a
bull dog
sky
while
critics
pour out 
word
sand 
castles
on distant 
shores
leaving
you
untouchable
as
i watch
the dark
sky
swallow
us all

such
soft words
sails 
at sunset
swells in surf
memories

boats 
pass 
us
in a fog
friends
forget u
and the sharks
eat 
the rest

life pours 
out
on broken
rocks
pennies
and poetry

white sails
at sunset
fingers
twist
thoughts
like
broken
pretzels
and poetry
both
assaults
and 
astound
my senses

my temples
on a printed page
sharp as
glass egos
words wound
out of tune
discarding
friends
like so much old
baggage
memories 
discard
the truth
hiding
reflections
in 
broken 
mirrors
under 
covers
of flesh
and 
regret
some
words
we can't take back
sharp as 
broken glass
word on a page
cut into us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/5/2016 8:32:00 PM
WOW, Good title. David. SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2016 1:52:00 PM
Mike Lee, awesome and I like the end...Linda
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David Lee
Date: 6/5/2016 2:46:00 PM
I've been working on use the least amount of word with the most meaning. Thank you. I enjoyed your poem about the squirrel very much.
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