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Broken Trust - David Williams -

~BROKEN TRUST~   ( Collaboration with David Williams )


by~ DAVID WILLIAMS

A Broken Trust Yet still,  
my heart aches for you
All love, all liking, now lost forever 
We are not even a drop of rain, just vapour 
Like dew-bespangled flowers, I weep 
All love all liking now lost, forever 
No longer will I drink your silvery voice 
Like dew-bespangled flowers I weep. 
My thirst for you, I cannot quench 
No longer will I drink ,your, silvery voice 
Betrayed, from trickled poisonous words
My thirst for you I cannot quench. 
That first gentle, shy, sweet kiss 
Betrayed from, trickled poisonous words
I trusted you, above all others 
That first gentle shy sweet, kiss 
You were my first true love.


by~ Poet D:

A kiss so sweet, I needed more clarity
Yet my heart aches the same way.
Growing hearts is inevitable, ours grew without morning dew.
How could you ever love me, so shy, I slipped away.
A kiss, I became someone else to please you!
Only to let you see the sweetness you clearly wanted to see.
The deepness in my eyes could not follow.
The dullness of my heart spoke alone.
Every minute your trust was an empty glass.
Rarely I used and held on to the weakness, of the heart.
The chastity around the moon injured my bloom.
Like the night that goes through a phase~ 
The sunrise will dry every drop of our mist.
Strong Solitude walls built, with broken tears.
After my hunger drowned our eyes with venomous words.
Deep down, I will always long for you ~my first true love

A collaboration with *David William

~My collaboration contest~

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 10:55 PM this is deep, **SKAT**

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 10:13 AM you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Ky Gatchell August 15, 2011 at 10:00 PM wonderful collab i know how you feel its painful when your true love truns out to be the person you would have never thought they would be...

Joe Maverick August 14, 2011 at 4:39 PM Enjoyed this joint effort,,all the best to the both of you..

Jun-Jun Villanueva August 14, 2011 at 1:53 AM a written art with great collaboration ~~~~amazing~~~smile~~~*_*junjun

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 13, 2011 at 11:58 PM what a smashing write here....Kudos.... I love it....smiles....Chiquita

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2011 at 12:43 PM PD. you did amazing here. I think these collaborations are really inspiring you and it's so nice to see. Would you like to finish a sonnet I started? If I gave you the first seven lines of it, and you just come up with the last seven? That's about the best I can do on a collaboration, so busy trying to keep up here! Let me know. LUv, Andrea

Bl Devnath August 11, 2011 at 2:54 PM Fantastic collaboration. Words used so sweetly and truly by both of you genius. Enjoyed. bl

Elizabeth Wesley August 9, 2011 at 6:41 PM They say two heads are better than one and that may be so but each of you alone aare also special. The story is greaat and it flows so well. You both did a great job!

James Peranteau August 9, 2011 at 9:59 AM Very nice Linda ! I really enjoy the collaborations you and the poets here on the Soup have accomplished ! Well done dear poet...I send my congrats to you and David for such a splendid write ! Have a wonderful week my dear friend and fellow ! Much love, james

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 9, 2011 at 2:06 AM Wow pd, you sure are successful in breaking free from that writer's block! This is another impressive collab, way to go to you both-- really enjoyed this one and of how you and David tied this together-- gosh I know I keep saying it but I sure do wonder how you will judge this contest??

James Foulk August 8, 2011 at 2:54 PM enjoyed reading this one, thank you for commenting on Under the Stars.

Black Eyed Susan August 7, 2011 at 5:27 PM your collaborations seem to be going very well - how will you ever pick a winner?

Michael J. Falotico August 7, 2011 at 5:20 PM Now this stands out.... great work from the both of you.. Each line omplimented th next... fine poety ....Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 4:33 PM super wonderful collab..PD..my BFF ..DAvid is a fantastic poet and his words are so touching ..about the inconsistencies of luv.. a great compliment are your lines my friend.. good luck..luv.. BFF in beach mode..

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2011 at 3:15 PM Good work to the two of you....Keep up the creative gift.Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about the Sparrow...Sara

Robert A. Dufresne August 7, 2011 at 9:26 AM hi PD. nice to hear from you! this is a great collab about the realities of first love from the perspective of both sides by David and yourself. great job. This is the third time I try to send a similar comment. pS. keeps knocking me off. Been having trrouble with it for days. Any problems on your side. Hope this gets to you this time

Zzzzz Zzzzz August 7, 2011 at 6:11 AM A good collaboration, with inventive imagery. Nicely done...both of you. Thanks Linda, for reading and commenting on LET'S ALL GO. I wanted to write something really different, even if it is only light-hearted. Hope you are well. xoxo Robert.

David Williams August 7, 2011 at 5:57 AM hey p.d. congratulations, you stuck to the theme extremely well, i love it, it is quite surreal reading, not knowing the ending.....if indeed it has ended! David

Kimberly Larocca August 7, 2011 at 12:23 AM I love how well this collaboration turned out. You guys did a great job. Good luck in the contest.

Don Johnson August 7, 2011 at 12:07 AM uh huh the plot thickens, and who is slipsliding away hey hey, the tangled web perceived by 2 players, undeceived , perhaps later. great colabb ere, xo, mates, Don

Judy Ball August 6, 2011 at 11:45 PM WoW! This is really good. You two did really well on this. Excellent emotion. You both stayed on the same wave length too. Super job. God Bless, JB

Lisa Cooper August 6, 2011 at 11:17 PM wow great collaberation! I am glad you are over that dreaded writers block. this is super

Jack Ross Jr. August 6, 2011 at 11:04 PM Awesome write Lovely lady and mate David....with love....old Jack

Poet Destroyer A August 6, 2011 at 11:04 PM wow! I am very pleased..lol... not even I knew ~at first~ who broke the trust.... well I figured it out after reading it out several times to my audience out here. thank you DAVID ~ FOR THE HONOR... I FEEL like a genius now... lol... I hope this poem is enjoyed by the readers! I plotted a very good confused part ~on who broke the trust~~ hahahhaha