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Broken Time

*Image of Shattered Time by dreamstime Broken Time Its hands went frozen a warm summer June, Bought it new when cool though it waned since then, Days were young and fresh loved e'er so oft loom, Vivid hues displayed stills toured page again. Surged wave tickles feet, residual foams, A swept updraft breaths as white floats thither, A thoughtless lapse inside watery zones, Checked, still ticking, stoppage, not a whisper. An off-Broadway show, we took the backstreet, Save being noted, the maddening crowd, Numbers by one less the proper count sheet, I look, it is time, lifts the curtained shroud. Crumpled real, keepsake be, not a myth, My minuteman whose Father Time, kept with. 2019 September 23 *2nd Place* In the backstreets of my mind ~~Silent One: Judged 2019 September 26
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Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 3:50 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:05 AM
My many thanks ~ Aloha always William
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:19 PM
William congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. I love your image and reading !
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Always the best Constance ~ Aloha always William
One Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:00 PM
I am humbled--THANKS ~ Aloha always William
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