Home » Poems » Daver Austin » Broken Steps

Broken Steps

BROKEN STEPS they had some good times days not too hot nor too cold cold preferable unless denied the warm room that place under broken steps once while cleaning up insulation was dumped ‘neath those broken steps and Lord knows how many cats had blessedly found a home

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/5/2010 6:24:00 AM

Dave, I love this, can just picture those cuties all snugged up.. :) Wilma

Marie Harrison

Date: 6/5/2010 10:50:00 AM

Oh, this is adorable! I love cats. Now they are warm and cozy snuggled up together in the evening. Lovely.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/4/2010 7:57:00 PM

Loved your title, loved even more how this is about cats finding a home...thanks for your nice comments --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2010 10:14:00 PM

Ahhh, a place for the homeless cats. So sweet, Dave!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2010 4:41:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Those stray cats sound like they found a good home for them that was snug and warm..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Heidie Buys

Date: 5/30/2010 3:03:00 PM

Great title and well written, love the thread of compassion and even whimsy.Well done. love Heidie

Date: 5/29/2010 9:02:00 PM

What a wonderful story. You have me smiling with this one. The title intrigued me and lured me in. Always an asset for any poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/29/2010 6:31:00 PM

Daver, this is a very compassionate poem - I loved it - great Job, thanks for the encouraging words, God Bless, mj

Skat A

Date: 5/29/2010 8:36:00 AM

LOVE IT DAVER THE COMMENT, YES MEN WHAT ARE THEY TO DO.. THEY R ONLY HUMAN. I GOT TO REMEMBER THAT WHEN I DO GET MARRIED WITH MY FIANCE.. SMILES TO U AND HAVE A WONDERFUL MEMORIAL DAY,,LUV IRMA

Constance La France

Date: 5/29/2010 7:15:00 AM

I used to live in a very, very old house. Well over 100 years old. It had a large covered wooden porch, and under was an opening, where stray cats found a haven, many a kitten was born under that porch. Many a cat found shelter. Your poem brought back some wonderful memories of that time. Just excellent. Constance

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/28/2010 7:09:00 PM

Other people's rubbish, a haven for the resourceful cat. well written Daver. ... cheers margaret

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2010 6:33:00 PM

Well penned Tanka. I love the ending

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2010 5:56:00 PM

NICE ONE DAVER, I SEE IT CLEARLY WE NEED TO WALK BROKEN STEPS. gOD WILL BLESS WITH A HOME. LOVE IT, HAVE YOUR SELF A WONDERFUL MEMORIAL WEEKEND,,IRMA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/28/2010 5:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Daver as you are always a pleasure to read. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/28/2010 3:42:00 PM

Cats are so resourceful, Daver, and I suspect some of them may be living under your porch steps right now. You do have a soft spot for these precious felines, don't you? You can groan all you want about being a codger, but your soft spot is showing in this wonderful poem. Love, Carolyn