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Broken Soul

Life is great Life has meaning Life is misery My soul depleting Life is colourful, shining with joy Life makes me feel like a broken and used toy Life is worth living – A journey I am eager to complete Life is a battle I am currently losing – Ending in disappointment and defeat…

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Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/9/2018 2:20:00 AM

Excellent poem. Perfectly expresses the battles which go on inside of us each day. We always hope the good wins but sometimes it doesnt. Oliver

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 3/16/2018 10:08:00 PM

Hello new friend...sad write but very well done. bbn

Renee Maritz
Date: 4/3/2018 12:11:00 PM

thanks its the battle in each of us every day. we are very confused most of the time, but we choose which side will win in the end :)