Renee Maritz Poet Quatrain

Broken Soul

Life is great
Life has meaning

Life is misery
My soul depleting

Life is colourful, shining with joy
Life makes me feel like a broken and used toy

Life is worth living – 
A journey I am eager to complete

Life is a battle I am currently losing – 
Ending in disappointment and defeat…

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Oliver Mckeithan April 9, 2018 at 2:20 AM Excellent poem. Perfectly expresses the battles which go on inside of us each day. We always hope the good wins but sometimes it doesnt. Oliver

Barbara Barry-Nishanian March 16, 2018 at 10:08 PM Hello new friend...sad write but very well done. bbn Renee Maritz April 3, 2018 at 12:11 PM thanks its the battle in each of us every day. we are very confused most of the time, but we choose which side will win in the end :)