Michelle Faulkner Poet Rhyme

Broken Rain

Broken rocky garden, overgrown, torn
Bending her splintered hope, divided pain
Token throwaway cuts, discarded scorn
Spending relief's pennies, enticing rain


9/15/19

Originally in ‘Her Rocky Garden’ on this site

Arbitrium Divisa 4 contest
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Juliet Ligon December 19, 2019 at 7:36 PM Well done! Congrats!

Gregory Richard Barden December 18, 2019 at 5:56 AM Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, Michelle - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o) <3

Rhona Mcferran October 2, 2019 at 11:24 PM Terrific writing... LOVE this! ;)

Connie Marcum Wong September 20, 2019 at 7:03 PM This is a fantastic entry for Greg's contest Michelle. You give the garden a personality of its own. I love it! I hope it receives a high placement! xxoo