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Broken Rain

Broken rocky garden, overgrown, torn Bending her splintered hope, divided pain Token throwaway cuts, discarded scorn Spending relief's pennies, enticing rain 9/15/19 Originally in ‘Her Rocky Garden’ on this site Arbitrium Divisa 4 contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/19/2019 7:36:00 PM

Well done! Congrats!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/18/2019 5:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, Michelle - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o) <3

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/2/2019 11:24:00 PM

Terrific writing... LOVE this! ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/20/2019 7:03:00 PM

This is a fantastic entry for Greg's contest Michelle. You give the garden a personality of its own. I love it! I hope it receives a high placement! xxoo