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Broken Promises

"Broken vows are like broken mirrors. They leave those who held to them bleeding and staring at fractured images of themselves." 
                         — Richard Paul Evans

1) I once thought our relationship 
was etched in stone
But now I'm left picking up 
the pieces alone
My heart's like a broken glass
that cannot be joined
What once was hot passion
seems to have been purloined

 CHORUS:
You left me bleeding, 
                          bleeding, 
                                bleeding... 
                                     ... like a rose
You left me needing, 
                         needing, 
                               needing...
                                     ... in love throes 

2) Our vows were once a sacred tie
between us two
But now they're just smithereens
of love so untrue
Broken shards that prick my heart
leave me bleeding red
Fractured beyond redemption
coz of words unsaid

CHORUS:
You left me bleeding, 
                          bleeding, 
                                bleeding... 
                                     ... like a rose
You left me needing, 
                         needing, 
                               needing...
                                     ... in love throes
 
3) Life, once a fairytale
with a happy ending
Now it seems a horror story
my soul's rending
Why did you promise me love, 
a part of yourself? 
When all your oaths were just hollow, 
void in itself

 CHORUS:
You left me bleeding, 
                          bleeding, 
                                bleeding... 
                                     ... like a rose
You left me needing, 
                         needing, 
                               needing...
                                     ... in love throes
 
4) I stare at a shattered image
of a cracked me
Damaged now beyond repair, 
as the world can see
Breathing hard through bruised agony 
still unspoken
Broken promises leave me 
hurt and heartbroken

BRIDGE:
Promises are meant to be kept
But you broke them and then, you left

CHORUS:
You left me bleeding, 
                          bleeding, 
                                bleeding... 
                                     ... like a rose
You left me needing, 
                         needing, 
                               needing...
                                     ... in love throes

  You left me bleeding, 
                          bleeding, 
                                bleeding...  
   You left me needing, 
                             needing, 
                                   needing...
                                         ... YOU... 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading. Your "Broken Promises" is a powerful write. Life is Not always what we want it to be. That is sad... Have a blessed day with your win..........
One Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 2:12 PM
Great lyrics.. your turned the prompt int o a wonderful song..
Jones Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 9:18 AM
Beautifully written oh how I wish I could hear it. There is an error message.
Onclaud Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 9:02 AM
talk of romance and broken hearts; so intoxicating!
Maverick Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 10:58 PM
Well whoever it is.?? They ain't worth It Joanna.' Mind you we all fall short? Best wishes for the contest.)
Hind Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 8:05 PM
beautiful lyrics, sorry though if you went through this- I thought the ending was very musical
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 11:26 AM
Wow. It's SO good with the movies. Fantastic refrain. This one really ought to score high! Crystol Wood and a few others make such great songs with AI. I don't even have the skill set to give my lyrics a tune!
Anaya Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 9:47 AM
The song, voice choice adds intensity to what already is emotional, bringing the whole lyric tone to life! Broken promises are hollow words indeed poetess, breaking my heart to pieces. Pleasure to read, another trophy win with me. Blessings:)
Winter Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 7:58 AM
This is heartbreakingly beautiful! Love the song! Good luck for the contest
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Beautiful lyrics. Loved the audio also.
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