Broken Promise

Let me stop and rest awhile,
Beneath the pine,
Beyond the bend in yonder path -
To lay my head upon your chest,
And breathe deep, your soul to mine.

Let me taste your lips so sweet ,
Before the profane,
Behind us leaps in unkind lies;
To slay my heart or steal my joy,
And bathe deep, my soul in pain.

Let me languish by your side,
Bearing sweet reprieve,
Bequeath to me; our son, a name,
To pay the promises you made,
And bring honor to our love, conceived.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 9:47 PM
they must stay stay focused on their duties.<: in a beautiful way though.. this is a really wonderful poem. -Always Lynette
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January 25, 2010 at 9:53 AM
This is beautiful <3
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January 21, 2010 at 9:03 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Virginia. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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January 21, 2010 at 12:55 AM
That is a lovely poem, it paints the story very well. Welcome to the 'soup.
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January 20, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets Virginia.. continue sharing your creative writings with us all as this lovely poem tonight, whose form is most like a Sonnet or Kyrielle .. enjoyed and thankxxx for this delight.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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