Christuraj Alex Poet Free verse

Broken Pitcher

When the pitcher of that little girl broke
And the nectar-like water she’d carried from far shed;
Some smiled; some laughed; some scolded her carelessness,
Some walked on their way as its normal happening;
It’s the poor neighbor boy, who was carrying two of such, 
Gave her one; erased her embarrassments; out of pure love!


06 November 2021
BITE SIZE POEM no25 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Kim Rodrigues November 10, 2021 at 8:51 PM Beautiful! Congratulations, Christuraj!

Susan Ashley November 9, 2021 at 7:57 AM Oh, your tender and lovely pen moves me very deeply, Christuraj. I adore your use of exquisite imagery and emotion and I just love the last line. A grand finale to a superb piece. Altruism is a beautiful quality that's all too rare. A fav! Congratulations for your excellent win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Christuraj Alex November 10, 2021 at 12:37 AM Thank you very much.

Beata Agustin November 9, 2021 at 5:08 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your muse... expounded wisely through your awesome poetic style. God bless you. Christuraj Alex November 10, 2021 at 12:36 AM Thank you very much.

Paulette Calasibetta November 8, 2021 at 7:59 AM Dear Christuraj, congratulations on your winning poem. Surely a beautiful message! Blessings, Paulette Christuraj Alex November 10, 2021 at 12:36 AM Thank you very much.

Curtis Johnson November 8, 2021 at 7:00 AM Hi Christuraj. This short poem mirrors to us 'life at its finest'. Thanks for sharing such a loving piece. Blessings. Christuraj Alex November 10, 2021 at 12:35 AM Thank you very much.

Unseeking Seeker November 8, 2021 at 4:41 AM Wow! An amazing verse with a beautiful message! Congrats on your win, Chris! Christuraj Alex November 10, 2021 at 12:34 AM Thank you very much.

Karen Jones November 7, 2021 at 1:59 PM Congrats on a win! Christuraj Alex November 8, 2021 at 12:01 AM Thank you very much.

Line Gauthier November 7, 2021 at 12:50 PM Lovely ~ well done with only six lines ~ congrats, Christuraj. Christuraj Alex November 8, 2021 at 12:02 AM Thank you very much.

Joseph May November 6, 2021 at 2:53 AM Kindness goes a long to ease the pain and suffering of others, Very nicely penned Christuraj Alex November 6, 2021 at 4:48 AM Thank you very much.