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Broken Pitcher

When the pitcher of that little girl broke And the nectar-like water she’d carried from far shed; Some smiled; some laughed; some scolded her carelessness, Some walked on their way as its normal happening; It’s the poor neighbor boy, who was carrying two of such, Gave her one; erased her embarrassments; out of pure love! 06 November 2021 BITE SIZE POEM no25 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/10/2021 8:51:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations, Christuraj!
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Date: 11/9/2021 7:57:00 AM
Oh, your tender and lovely pen moves me very deeply, Christuraj. I adore your use of exquisite imagery and emotion and I just love the last line. A grand finale to a superb piece. Altruism is a beautiful quality that's all too rare. A fav! Congratulations for your excellent win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/10/2021 12:37:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/9/2021 5:08:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your muse... expounded wisely through your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 11/10/2021 12:36:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:59:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, congratulations on your winning poem. Surely a beautiful message! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/10/2021 12:36:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:00:00 AM
Hi Christuraj. This short poem mirrors to us 'life at its finest'. Thanks for sharing such a loving piece. Blessings.
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Date: 11/10/2021 12:35:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2021 4:41:00 AM
Wow! An amazing verse with a beautiful message! Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Date: 11/10/2021 12:34:00 AM
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Date: 11/7/2021 1:59:00 PM
Congrats on a win!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/8/2021 12:01:00 AM
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Date: 11/7/2021 12:50:00 PM
Lovely ~ well done with only six lines ~ congrats, Christuraj.
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Date: 11/8/2021 12:02:00 AM
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Date: 11/6/2021 2:53:00 AM
Kindness goes a long to ease the pain and suffering of others, Very nicely penned
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Date: 11/6/2021 4:48:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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