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Broken Path

Someone see you go With a heart broken A scene hardly accept Unsolved, unsettled pry Heavy heart to parting Agreed finding joy over To appease grievances How would they depart The peace not mended As they go part ways Tears flowing secretly What a hurtful departure Happiness is elusive To a heart that's broken.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2025 1:02:00 PM

Hello Hugo, Yue3s that is so true. When heart broken the sadness seems to last longer that usual. Once the heart is broken sadness seems to take over. it takes a while to see the light at the end of the tunnel. Much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/6/2025 10:29:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Many couples part ways in anger. Yes talking it out is the best way to settle a dispute. Oh, your welcome. love you more. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 5/5/2025 7:48:00 PM

Based on my experience, seldom we can find happiness to others if we have unsettled or unfinished business in a relationship. Partways due to anger is not good, parting time is really sad and hurtful. We can't find peace in love and life if there's burden in every heart. The way ti settled dispute is to confront and make amend to that person with a nice talk, negotiate in peace and break truthfully. In this way, no heart feeling, no remorse left between both parties. In the time they met in the future, they can laught each other, talk each other and reminincense their past as part of their love story. Thank you, Darlene for your nice comment. Love you more./Hugo.