Broken Oaths

It is relentlessly our intent
To do the right thing.
Why then do we relent—
A bird with broken wing?

We make earnest pledges
Vowing to fly higher.
But they fray at the edges—
Caught in self-made mire.

We would strive to be
A friend of welcoming ways.
Except they quickly flee—
Gliding through wasted days.

We pray for a resolution
To these earth-bound misses.
But we forestall a solution—
Opting for self-inflicted hisses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 6:46 PM
This was great, I love the flow of it, the message, and everything. Very well done Paul!
Schneiter Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 8:22 PM
I value and appreciate your comment, Casarah (in fact, I value and appreciate ALL of your comments). Blessings!
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