Sotto Poet Poet Pantoum

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Broken Mirror's Strategy

A gutted mirror invents a tangled human scheme
My back might be found crooked from the jabber,
A puddling curb tried throwing the twisted dream
None bound for the scope spawned by a blunder.

My back might be found crooked from the jabber
Singing in heaven embeds tune of moral goodwill,
None bound for the scope spawned by a blunder
After a few years, you'd be ditched with side-will. 

Singing in heaven embeds tune of moral goodwill
Straying guilt whetting shock and clear dismay
After a few years, you'd be ditched with side-will 
The ridiculous concept of a fantasy hiding way. 

Straying guilt whetting shock and clear dismay
The abstraction of waning grace is a little hazy
The ridiculous concept of a fantasy hiding way,
Tons of metal swords shattered by bared facility.

The abstraction of waning grace is a little hazy
A puddling curb tried throwing the twisted dream
Tons of metal swords shattered by bared facility
A gutted mirror invents a tangled human scheme. 


Written: May 07, 2022

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Demetrios Trifiatis May 8, 2022 at 6:48 AM An exceptionally well-written Pantoum, my friend, Lasaad. Profound thinking is included in your fine verses! Be blessed!

Victor Buhagiar May 8, 2022 at 6:40 AM Seems many are afraid of reading your poem. I would prefer not to look at a gutted mirror. Come to think of it I prefer not to look into any mirror these days.