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Broken Man

rounded shoulders a broken man the life drained clear out of him his heart chewed and spit out injured crushed nothing but a shell barely a ghost of the man i knew AP: 2nd place 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 5, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/6/2019 9:44:00 PM

Devastating---ly precise! Theodore Dreiser is beaming down from Heaven at you. A FAVE for me, Line. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2019 10:22:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/5/2019 11:14:00 PM

You have completely explained our worst fears here, my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 11:18:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.