Broken Love

I put a flower in her head and recieved a thorn in my heart
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Arnone Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 3:04 PM
If you actually put a flower in her head, then you deserve a thorn in your heart. Now, if you put a flower on her head, that is another story. ;-)
Kimathi Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Very emotional.... Congrats Mibdah, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Mir Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 8:13 AM
thnq a lot
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:40 AM
One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara
Mir Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 8:14 AM
thnq
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:53 PM
ahhh, it's perfect for broken love!!
Mir Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 9:41 PM
thnq for such kind words..
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Wow, so nice and sad. Congrats on your win :)
Mir Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 9:43 PM
glad that you liked it...thnq for encouraging
Day Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse
Mir Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 9:55 PM
thnq for showering much love
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Congratulations Mibdah...
Mir Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 9:55 PM
thnq a lot....
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 4:55 PM
Mibdah, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**
Mir Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 9:57 PM
thnq for such great welcome..never expected much love
A  Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Mibdah, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *BettyBoop*
Mir Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 12:23 AM
Thnq for such kind words.And for the encouragement.I will make it up to your expectations.
A   Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Mibdah, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Mir Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Thnq for such a heartwarming welcome.I sure would love to read them all Linda. Well, about my poetic skills,I simply want to say that I adore darkness and that is the theme of most of my writings.I can write on any prompt given:May it be line prompt,word prompt,image prompt or whatsoever.Poetry is my passion.I write sonnets too.I mostly write in rhymes,I least prefer free verse because it doesn't go with my taste. Thank you again for such warm words of appreciation. MIBDAH
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