Broken Love

I put a flower in her head and recieved a thorn in my heart

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Tom Arnone

Date: 9/16/2016 3:04:00 PM

If you actually put a flower in her head, then you deserve a thorn in your heart. Now, if you put a flower on her head, that is another story. ;-)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/22/2016 7:09:00 AM

Very emotional.... Congrats Mibdah, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/22/2016 8:13:00 AM

thnq a lot

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2016 7:40:00 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/22/2016 8:14:00 AM

thnq

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 2:53:00 PM

ahhh, it's perfect for broken love!!

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/19/2016 9:41:00 PM

thnq for such kind words..

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/18/2016 10:26:00 AM

Wow, so nice and sad. Congrats on your win :)

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/19/2016 9:43:00 PM

glad that you liked it...thnq for encouraging

Jesse Day

Date: 7/18/2016 12:02:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/19/2016 9:55:00 PM

thnq for showering much love

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/17/2016 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations Mibdah...

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/19/2016 9:55:00 PM

thnq a lot....

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 4:55:00 PM

Mibdah, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/19/2016 9:57:00 PM

thnq for such great welcome..never expected much love

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2016 3:47:00 AM

Mibdah, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *BettyBoop*

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/12/2016 12:23:00 AM

Thnq for such kind words.And for the encouragement.I will make it up to your expectations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2016 12:00:00 PM

Mibdah, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mibdah Mir
Date: 7/10/2016 2:08:00 AM

Thnq for such a heartwarming welcome.I sure would love to read them all Linda. Well, about my poetic skills,I simply want to say that I adore darkness and that is the theme of most of my writings.I can write on any prompt given:May it be line prompt,word prompt,image prompt or whatsoever.Poetry is my passion.I write sonnets too.I mostly write in rhymes,I least prefer free verse because it doesn't go with my taste. Thank you again for such warm words of appreciation. MIBDAH