Broken Love

Broken love
open flesh wound
across my heart
aching love
wax heart dripping
burning across
my flesh
smoldering love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Semeniuk Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:55 PM
niice poem!..so many of my poems get confused as my own life but thats the beauty of being able to portray stories so true to life!..
Hill Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 9:13 PM
lol, why does every poem have to relate to what a poet is going through at that time they post it, I post to relate to someone else perhaps sometimes :) I'm good!
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June 23, 2010 at 9:10 PM
Deep write,,, a heart which cant be mended and healed... keep your head up....P.D.
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