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''Broken Light''

~Why will your love never be true? Such an absent silence. Wearing a heart I can see right through. An emotionless ploy. Faint face,as eyes that were always dim. I remember now,the smile that was forever saved for you. But, no return, left lonely. I turned away from our broken light.~ This is for children who has felt abandoned by parents~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/15/2012 3:21:00 PM
I like this Kacey, I hope this didn`t happen to you! xoxo Laila
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Date: 4/13/2012 3:36:00 PM
Well done Kacey,touching and strong poem. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/2/2012 12:15:00 PM
Hey Kacey hope you enter my latest contest..David
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:41:00 PM
Powerful write Kacey....I was also made to feel that way....read my poem 'Painstaking Views' .....Hugs
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Date: 3/24/2012 6:27:00 PM
Oh how sad. I hope this didn't happen to you. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/24/2012 2:08:00 PM
a gut wrenching yet beautiful piece with stunning emotional appeal, kacey.. may all children be loved!... so well done!..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:49:00 PM
Very strong words - great...........George
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:49:00 PM
Kacey I like this, it is strong and speaks hard true words, I am one of those children, thanks for your comments, have a great weekend ...David
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