''Broken Light''

~Why will your love never be true?
Such an absent silence.
Wearing a heart I can see right through.
An emotionless ploy.
Faint face,as eyes that were always dim.
I remember now,the smile that was forever saved for you.
But, no return, left lonely.
I turned away from our broken light.~



This is for children who has felt abandoned by parents~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mjelde Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 3:21 PM
I like this Kacey, I hope this didn`t happen to you! xoxo Laila
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Well done Kacey,touching and strong poem. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Hey Kacey hope you enter my latest contest..David
Macfarlane Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Powerful write Kacey....I was also made to feel that way....read my poem 'Painstaking Views' .....Hugs
Johnson Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Oh how sad. I hope this didn't happen to you. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 2:08 PM
a gut wrenching yet beautiful piece with stunning emotional appeal, kacey.. may all children be loved!... so well done!..:) huggs!
Aul Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Very strong words - great...........George
Williams Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Kacey I like this, it is strong and speaks hard true words, I am one of those children, thanks for your comments, have a great weekend ...David
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