Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Broken Hearted Sunsets Theme 4

Broken Hearted Sunsets

With all the broken hearted sunsets I’ve seen
From misunderstandings, to words that are mean
The sun returns to bring a new day
Rising with hope to mend our ways
Shining on water, sparkling on snow
Bringing reflections of all that we know
Returning smiles with bright daisies that grow
To pick the best from the seeds we sow
Within our lives, always changing we see
Broken hearted sunsets can set us free

Heidi Sands

1/23/18

Placed second in the One in Five poetry contest.  Theme #4 Broken hearted sunsets.

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Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 10:56 PM All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Heidi - blessings as always, my friend! :-) Heidi Sands February 17, 2018 at 2:59 PM Thank you for your kind comments :)

Reason A. Poteet February 7, 2018 at 7:51 PM Congratulations on your win, Heidi. I like the twist you take and the optimism you portray. Heidi Sands February 8, 2018 at 7:27 AM Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit February 7, 2018 at 9:52 AM Returning with congrats Heidi, on your win! Heidi Sands February 7, 2018 at 10:00 AM Thank you Vijay :)

John Gondolf January 25, 2018 at 10:53 AM Nicely written, Heidi, I like the fact that even though it starts out on a sad note, there is a new beginning in the morning reflecting hope and happiness. Best of luck. John Heidi Sands January 25, 2018 at 10:54 AM Thank you John. :)

Akkina Downing January 24, 2018 at 8:00 PM Awe, no wonder I'm always sat when I'm watching it going down. Beautiful poem Miss Heidi! Hugs and smiles :) Heidi Sands January 25, 2018 at 9:22 AM Thank you Akkina. I appreciate your visit. Have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2018 at 1:27 PM - So true and lovely written, Heidi - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands January 24, 2018 at 3:17 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your comment :)

Mike Gentile January 24, 2018 at 8:00 AM Such a beautiful expression for a new day and a new chance to make things better. There is always hope and your poems so often embody that much needed feeling, lovely and sweet. Good luck in the contest xxoo Happy Wednesday! Heidi Sands January 24, 2018 at 9:09 AM Thank you so much for your comment and support Mike. Happy Wednesday! :)

Charlie Smith January 23, 2018 at 3:03 PM Your words drop a little sunshine on all of us Heidi, thank you... Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 4:37 PM Thank you so much Charlie :)

Silent One January 23, 2018 at 2:45 PM So many broken hearted sunsets, but so many happy sunrises Heidi... Good luck in the contest.... Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 4:36 PM Thank you Silent One :)

Frank Sheehan January 23, 2018 at 12:32 PM Great rhyme. Wonderful write. Fantastic pen. Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 4:36 PM Thank you Frank!

Demetrios Trifiatis January 23, 2018 at 11:48 AM Tomorrow's happiness sometimes we owe to broken hearts at sunset! Poetically profound message dear , Heidi! Superb! Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 11:57 AM Thank you Demetrios :)

Eve Roper January 23, 2018 at 11:36 AM Great job, Heidi, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 11:57 AM Thank you Eve :)

Vijay Pandit January 23, 2018 at 11:33 AM I like the hopeful tone of your poem Heidi. You are right, there is always a silver lining that gives us freedom to dream..as you say.. the seeds we sow...and daisies that grow. Well written..best for a win. Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 11:57 AM Thank you for your kind comment Vijay :)

Frederic Parker January 23, 2018 at 10:49 AM a nice choice of theme, and a really well written poem ...good luck Heidi Sands January 23, 2018 at 10:50 AM Thank you Frederic! I appreciate your comment :)