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Broken Hearted Sunsets Theme 4

Broken Hearted Sunsets

With all the broken hearted sunsets I’ve seen
From misunderstandings, to words that are mean
The sun returns to bring a new day
Rising with hope to mend our ways
Shining on water, sparkling on snow
Bringing reflections of all that we know
Returning smiles with bright daisies that grow
To pick the best from the seeds we sow
Within our lives, always changing we see
Broken hearted sunsets can set us free

Heidi Sands

1/23/18

Placed second in the One in Five poetry contest.  Theme #4 Broken hearted sunsets.

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Gregory Richard Barden Date: 2/15/2018 10:56:00 PM All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Heidi - blessings as always, my friend! :-) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/17/2018 2:59:00 PM Thank you for your kind comments :)

Reason A. Poteet Date: 2/7/2018 7:51:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Heidi. I like the twist you take and the optimism you portray. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/8/2018 7:27:00 AM Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/7/2018 9:52:00 AM Returning with congrats Heidi, on your win! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 2/7/2018 10:00:00 AM Thank you Vijay :)

John Gondolf Date: 1/25/2018 10:53:00 AM Nicely written, Heidi, I like the fact that even though it starts out on a sad note, there is a new beginning in the morning reflecting hope and happiness. Best of luck. John Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/25/2018 10:54:00 AM Thank you John. :)

Akkina Downing Date: 1/24/2018 8:00:00 PM Awe, no wonder I'm always sat when I'm watching it going down. Beautiful poem Miss Heidi! Hugs and smiles :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/25/2018 9:22:00 AM Thank you Akkina. I appreciate your visit. Have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/24/2018 1:27:00 PM - So true and lovely written, Heidi - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/24/2018 3:17:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your comment :)

Mike Gentile Date: 1/24/2018 8:00:00 AM Such a beautiful expression for a new day and a new chance to make things better. There is always hope and your poems so often embody that much needed feeling, lovely and sweet. Good luck in the contest xxoo Happy Wednesday! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/24/2018 9:09:00 AM Thank you so much for your comment and support Mike. Happy Wednesday! :)

Charlie Smith Date: 1/23/2018 3:03:00 PM Your words drop a little sunshine on all of us Heidi, thank you... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 4:37:00 PM Thank you so much Charlie :)

Silent One Date: 1/23/2018 2:45:00 PM So many broken hearted sunsets, but so many happy sunrises Heidi... Good luck in the contest.... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 4:36:00 PM Thank you Silent One :)

Frank Sheehan Date: 1/23/2018 12:32:00 PM Great rhyme. Wonderful write. Fantastic pen. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 4:36:00 PM Thank you Frank!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/23/2018 11:48:00 AM Tomorrow's happiness sometimes we owe to broken hearts at sunset! Poetically profound message dear , Heidi! Superb! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 11:57:00 AM Thank you Demetrios :)

Eve Roper Date: 1/23/2018 11:36:00 AM Great job, Heidi, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 11:57:00 AM Thank you Eve :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/23/2018 11:33:00 AM I like the hopeful tone of your poem Heidi. You are right, there is always a silver lining that gives us freedom to dream..as you say.. the seeds we sow...and daisies that grow. Well written..best for a win. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 11:57:00 AM Thank you for your kind comment Vijay :)

Frederic Parker Date: 1/23/2018 10:49:00 AM a nice choice of theme, and a really well written poem ...good luck Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/23/2018 10:50:00 AM Thank you Frederic! I appreciate your comment :)