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Broken Hearted Sunsets Theme 4

Broken Hearted Sunsets With all the broken hearted sunsets I’ve seen From misunderstandings, to words that are mean The sun returns to bring a new day Rising with hope to mend our ways Shining on water, sparkling on snow Bringing reflections of all that we know Returning smiles with bright daisies that grow To pick the best from the seeds we sow Within our lives, always changing we see Broken hearted sunsets can set us free Heidi Sands 1/23/18 Placed second in the One in Five poetry contest. Theme #4 Broken hearted sunsets.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 10:56:00 PM

All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Heidi - blessings as always, my friend! :-)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/17/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/7/2018 7:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Heidi. I like the twist you take and the optimism you portray.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/8/2018 7:27:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/7/2018 9:52:00 AM

Returning with congrats Heidi, on your win!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/7/2018 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/25/2018 10:53:00 AM

Nicely written, Heidi, I like the fact that even though it starts out on a sad note, there is a new beginning in the morning reflecting hope and happiness. Best of luck. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2018 10:54:00 AM

Thank you John. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/24/2018 8:00:00 PM

Awe, no wonder I'm always sat when I'm watching it going down. Beautiful poem Miss Heidi! Hugs and smiles :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/25/2018 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Akkina. I appreciate your visit. Have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2018 1:27:00 PM

- So true and lovely written, Heidi - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your comment :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/24/2018 8:00:00 AM

Such a beautiful expression for a new day and a new chance to make things better. There is always hope and your poems so often embody that much needed feeling, lovely and sweet. Good luck in the contest xxoo Happy Wednesday!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2018 9:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment and support Mike. Happy Wednesday! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/23/2018 3:03:00 PM

Your words drop a little sunshine on all of us Heidi, thank you...

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlie :)

Silent One

Date: 1/23/2018 2:45:00 PM

So many broken hearted sunsets, but so many happy sunrises Heidi... Good luck in the contest....

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Silent One :)

Frank Sheehan

Date: 1/23/2018 12:32:00 PM

Great rhyme. Wonderful write. Fantastic pen.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Frank!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/23/2018 11:48:00 AM

Tomorrow's happiness sometimes we owe to broken hearts at sunset! Poetically profound message dear , Heidi! Superb!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/23/2018 11:36:00 AM

Great job, Heidi, luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thank you Eve :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/23/2018 11:33:00 AM

I like the hopeful tone of your poem Heidi. You are right, there is always a silver lining that gives us freedom to dream..as you say.. the seeds we sow...and daisies that grow. Well written..best for a win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Vijay :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/23/2018 10:49:00 AM

a nice choice of theme, and a really well written poem ...good luck

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2018 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Frederic! I appreciate your comment :)