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Broken Hearted Man

Bleeds Pleads Begs Love leaks down his sleeve Bone and bristle Heart reaped Soul raped A broken man with homeless face Waiting Meekly at hells fiery gates Dreams in a bottle Messages from above Broken glass cuts deep Into rivers red of bloody consumption The earth takes what the pregnant give Spitting away The butterflies That hover and hope For better days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2016 2:41:00 PM
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Arthur, a deep and beautifully penned write, very emotional and I am liking this 7 ~
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Casarah Nance
Date: 3/18/2016 8:03:00 PM
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intense, I can feel the emotion in every word. hugs
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/18/2016 6:16:00 PM
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"Love leaks down his sleeve." This poem would make tears leak down cheeks Arthur.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 6:10:00 PM
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Such intense deep and sad imagery Arthur I think we have all seen broken people like this :-( hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2016 1:54:00 AM
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Arthur, such a deep and haunting write, I want to man to be forgiven, life should be about forgiveness, I am loving this 7 ~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/16/2016 3:37:00 PM
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sad and profound, Arthur. I loved the butterfly image in it.
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Kim Difford
Date: 3/14/2016 6:55:00 PM
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So! powerful! Arthur. The expression of the feelings, so concise and apt. The depth is amazing! I like the line' broken glass cuts deep'. Kim
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/14/2016 5:15:00 PM
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We all hope for better days...I saw quite a few of those bottles on the curb yesterday.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/14/2016 3:13:00 PM
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This is very sad Arthur, a heart wrenching poem indeed.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/13/2016 11:46:00 PM
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The image of this man is very profound great write like always dear friend
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/13/2016 11:33:00 PM
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wow, this is such a good read, thank you a great write, a strong 7 here.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/13/2016 11:22:00 PM
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What powerful imagery here in this very emotive poem, Arthur. I really felt for this poor man! Beautifully expressed, a 7 from me.
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