Broken Hearted

 
My heart broken, fragmented and shattered, you left me suddenly for the unknown; now, my love and path - just pages scattered, your soul to another far realm has flown ! Lost, to wander a cruel world forlorn, my anchor, safe harbor and true north gone; forever, and ever, ever to mourn, to recall and weep and weep each new dawn ! Why the Lord took you that day deep shrouded, we never know the reason for a death; and now my thoughts are tattered and clouded, held you to my heart to hear your last breath ! Never to be forgotten my true love, and can you watch over me from above ! _________________ June 4, 2021 Poetry/Sonnet/Broken Hearted Copyright Protected, ID 06-136-148-04 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France (The missing letter in my Lipogram poem is "i") Written for the Premier contest, Lipogram sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 06/30/2021 Second Place
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Daniel Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Sadly beautiful, Constance, congratulations:)
La France Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Jo, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Pathak Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:21 PM
'Broken Hearted', I feel fortunate to have chanced upon such a beautiful sonnet, and I understand a winner too, congrats.
La France Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Aniruddha, thank you for the congrats and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Agustin Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 8:13 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
La France Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Beata, thanks for the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:31 PM
An emotional outpouring. Loved the ending. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
La France Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Rama, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A sad yet "Beautiful" story/write. It is so very hard to see a love one go. I love your ending. I know he is watching over you until you see him again. Have a blessed day with your win....................
La France Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, love and serenity _Constance
Allison Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:58 AM
your trademark is writing melancholy poems, this is so beautifully penned Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Jan, thank you for the compliment and congrats, true sad poems is my forte, love and serenity _Constance
Pinet Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your amazing, emotional poem "Broken Hearted," has placed "Second" in my contest. You should take pride, it was a difficult contest and I was very strict, but your poem was special and rose to the second spot on the list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Emile, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my wonderful placement, and the compliment and congratulations, yes it was a difficult contest for sure, peace and tranquility _Constance
Parker Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:02 PM
a sonnet...close to my heart dear poet, a beautiful poem
La France Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Frederic, thank you for the visit and compliment, so hard to omit the "i" in writing it, but in a way the poem seems better to me ! Peace _Constance
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June 4, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Sad, though beautiful Constance, a wonderful memorial poem. All the best… Belle
La France Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Bell, thank you for the comment and compliment, love _Constance
Horne Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 1:33 PM
beautiful heartfelt write x
La France Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Jack, thank you for the compliment, I was thinking about you today, hope all is well ? Peace _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Wonderful write, sweet friend. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
La France Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, love _Constance
Hankins Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Beautifully-written tribute to One who has gone beyond. Sad, but so expressive, Constance. I experience these feelings almost every day.
La France Avatar
June 4, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment and the nice comment, my grief will never go away and I accept that, peace _Constance
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