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Broken Hearted

My heart broken, fragmented and shattered, you left me suddenly for the unknown; now, my love and path - just pages scattered, your soul to another far realm has flown ! Lost, to wander a cruel world forlorn, my anchor, safe harbor and true north gone; forever, and ever, ever to mourn, to recall and weep and weep each new dawn ! Why the Lord took you that day deep shrouded, we never know the reason for a death; and now my thoughts are tattered and clouded, held you to my heart to hear your last breath ! Never to be forgotten my true love, and can you watch over me from above ! _________________ June 4, 2021 Poetry/Sonnet/Broken Hearted Copyright Protected, ID 06-136-148-04 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France (The missing letter in my Lipogram poem is "i") Written for the Premier contest, Lipogram sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 06/30/2021 Second Place

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Date: 7/1/2021 1:33:00 AM
Sadly beautiful, Constance, congratulations:)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2021 3:15:00 PM
Jo, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 6/30/2021 10:21:00 PM
'Broken Hearted', I feel fortunate to have chanced upon such a beautiful sonnet, and I understand a winner too, congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2021 3:16:00 PM
Aniruddha, thank you for the congrats and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 6/30/2021 8:13:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/1/2021 3:16:00 PM
Beata, thanks for the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 6/30/2021 5:31:00 PM
An emotional outpouring. Loved the ending. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/1/2021 3:17:00 PM
Rama, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 6/30/2021 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A sad yet "Beautiful" story/write. It is so very hard to see a love one go. I love your ending. I know he is watching over you until you see him again. Have a blessed day with your win....................
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2021 2:11:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, love and serenity _Constance
Date: 6/30/2021 11:58:00 AM
your trademark is writing melancholy poems, this is so beautifully penned Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2021 2:12:00 PM
Jan, thank you for the compliment and congrats, true sad poems is my forte, love and serenity _Constance
Date: 6/30/2021 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your amazing, emotional poem "Broken Hearted," has placed "Second" in my contest. You should take pride, it was a difficult contest and I was very strict, but your poem was special and rose to the second spot on the list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/30/2021 2:13:00 PM
Emile, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my wonderful placement, and the compliment and congratulations, yes it was a difficult contest for sure, peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 6/4/2021 6:02:00 PM
a sonnet...close to my heart dear poet, a beautiful poem
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Constance La France
Date: 6/4/2021 6:49:00 PM
Frederic, thank you for the visit and compliment, so hard to omit the "i" in writing it, but in a way the poem seems better to me ! Peace _Constance
Date: 6/4/2021 3:41:00 PM
Sad, though beautiful Constance, a wonderful memorial poem. All the best… Belle
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Date: 6/4/2021 6:50:00 PM
Bell, thank you for the comment and compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/4/2021 1:33:00 PM
beautiful heartfelt write x
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Date: 6/4/2021 6:51:00 PM
Jack, thank you for the compliment, I was thinking about you today, hope all is well ? Peace _Constance
Date: 6/4/2021 12:52:00 PM
Wonderful write, sweet friend. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/4/2021 6:51:00 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/4/2021 12:25:00 PM
Beautifully-written tribute to One who has gone beyond. Sad, but so expressive, Constance. I experience these feelings almost every day.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/4/2021 6:52:00 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment and the nice comment, my grief will never go away and I accept that, peace _Constance

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