Broken Heart, Broken Dreams

Standing quietly here
with an empty feeling
when all I believe in 
are falling apart into thousand pieces

The sun is shining so bright
The flowers look as beautiful
Yet my heart is darker than the darkest night
as it falls apart into thousand pieces

The love that I adore
is the same love that smashed me
cut me deep in my veins and my bones
breaking me into thousand pieces

My heart
My soul
My dream
Fly high and fall, crashed into thousand pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Basar Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Thank you. I will continue writing....
Shahwan Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 8:29 AM
This is a thrilling poetry. Loved it. Wishing you all the best.
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 6:55 AM
We have all had at least one dream broken so you work speaks to so many out there. Keep writing. Sara
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