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Broken Heart

entrapped by the agonies of the life
astraying in the bewilderment of world
hunting for trustee for my heart
the broken heart voiced from inside
in the mundane existence, no one is worthy of trust

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/15/2018 2:14:00 AM

My dear Mr. Imtiaz, your message is sad but beautiful, but your style/type of your poem is not Rubaiyat.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/30/2018 10:14:00 PM

thanks, i will change

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/15/2018 9:32:00 AM

This is great example of free verse, or there is something called i don't know.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/15/2018 2:46:00 AM

Salam alikm dear Salehi...Thanks for visiting my page... and commenting for my poem. yes i know it is not rubaiyat, but did not find any other which is suitable. i would love if you tell me the correct one as i don't have poetry knowledge very much. thanks a lot

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/15/2018 2:45:00 AM

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/8/2018 8:07:00 PM

Life will give its sad woes my friend. Heartbreak being one of them. Always look to hope in the future for it rewards patience and virtue.. Great poem... A fav...

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/9/2018 6:02:00 PM

Thanks Robert for such a wonderful comments. i really love it

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/5/2018 3:01:00 AM

Seems you can't get through this life without a broken heart. But you can't or shouldn't live without love either. But as they say, time heals all wound. Thank you for reading my The Young Girl :)

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/5/2018 3:03:00 AM

Thanks Debbie............time heals all wounds truly...you have to compromise in most of the cases

Vera Duggan

Date: 3/3/2018 8:09:00 PM

Like Rhoda I have had my heart broken once and I can assure you it is not very nice but like everything else I got over it but now I do find it hard to trust, thank you for this delightful verse and take care.......Vera

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/4/2018 4:43:00 AM

Thanks Vera for expressing your true feelings. Trust is really hard ...i pray you also find a trust person...... thanks and take care of you as well, dear Vera

Marc Acrich

Date: 3/2/2018 7:31:00 AM

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 2/28/2018 10:24:00 AM

But without a trusting heart, one would not experience the joy of love, so the risk is worth it. Terrific write Muhammad. Hugs

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia for commenting, Yes you have reached to the depth of the poem..........and taking risk is inevitable , the real love start after taking the risk..............i love your comments.....HUGs back

Rhoda Galgiani

Date: 2/26/2018 12:56:00 PM

I've had a broken heart twice - the only trust I have is with God - He never fails me...time cures all...rg

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/26/2018 1:01:00 PM

your comment describe the main idea of my poem...thanks

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/26/2018 1:00:00 PM

Yes, truly said............God is only one whom you can trust without any doubt but for people it is nearyly impossible or rare nowadays.........if you found some your are the luckiest one

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/25/2018 9:51:00 AM

This is sad and has not been my personal experience. I believe people need to be trusted in order to become trustworthy.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/25/2018 10:07:00 AM

yes you are right.......it is Trust that we believe there is God...........

Elle Smith

Date: 2/23/2018 7:32:00 PM

You have captured the sentiments perfectly!!! Elle

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/23/2018 11:37:00 PM

Thanks a lot Elle. and have a nice day

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/23/2018 1:11:00 PM

Your sad sentiments are expressed in beautiful melancholy tones of imagery, Muhammad. Each emotional line conveys the feelings of someone looking for a love he can believe in and despairing that he might not find it.. 'hunting for trustee for my heart' - is so stirring. A very expressive poem. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/23/2018 11:39:00 PM

Thanks Susan. your comments are a source of encourangement and guide for me. thanks and have a nice day. Muhammad

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/22/2018 2:13:00 PM

Hello Muhammad,yes there are people out there that are trustful. out there. Have a nice day my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup. have a nice day my friend.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/23/2018 4:06:00 AM

Hi Darlene Thanks a lot for your comforting and lovely comments.... Have a nice day too Thanks Muahmmad

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 2/11/2018 1:34:00 PM

If you find someone who speaks the TRUTH in your life, then that person is worthy of your trust and your love. If you are on that path, I have no doubt you will find the one and they will find you.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/12/2018 12:10:00 AM

Absolutely correct.........The path of truth always lead to destination. i love and your words , because they always have deep meaning, and positive improvement. Thanks a lot

Becca Teagan

Date: 2/4/2018 11:42:00 PM

There are very few who are worthy of our trust. I hope you will find this person, the trustee of your heart.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/4/2018 11:49:00 PM

Thanks Becca, you are absolutely right.............Inside of a person is the thing which is to be adorned with character etc Thanks and well wishes for you and your loved ones

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2017 3:30:00 PM

I think there are trustworthy people but very difficult to find. I enjoy your poetry and hope to see you posting more and more.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/23/2017 11:38:00 PM

Yeah correct but diifucult to find............. Thanks for your kind words of appreciation

Wendy Nipas

Date: 11/22/2017 9:29:00 AM

Honest expressions of real feelings can be very healing. Keep on writing. I love your choice of words.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/22/2017 10:42:00 AM

Thanks you so much Wendy for your kind and lovely words of appreciation.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/10/2017 6:07:00 AM

This is a very sad but beautiful write, I ve also read your other poem eternal love and both of these are really wonderful, you write beautifully, just carry on writing and I ll be looking for your poems, anyway, I m also from Pakistan and can you do me a favour, can you plz read my poems as well and let me know how they are

Maria Williams

Date: 9/29/2017 6:34:00 AM

This is a sad write, but full of imagery. I do hope you find true love soon....Maria

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/29/2017 7:06:00 AM

Hi dear friend Maria , Thanks a lot for your lovely words. and pray for me.I hope you also find true happiness in your life thanks

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2017 7:13:00 AM

A sad write..

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/28/2017 7:51:00 AM

Yes , mostly you will find corruption in the world instead of goodness. but exceptions are also there. there are good people as well but very few.......1/1000

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