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"broken Heart"

You hurt me
    I hurt someone else,
                      here we are..


"Two wrongs contest"..

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James Fraser

August 23, 2010 at 1:06 PM

Very clever Senyru, it's not hard to see why it won >> James

Doris Culverhouse

August 20, 2010 at 2:13 PM

congrats on the well deserved win!! Take care!

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 17, 2010 at 8:52 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael in Paula Swanson's contest " Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

August 17, 2010 at 7:04 AM

That's the way it is sometimes, Michael, a form of revenge, I guess. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 16, 2010 at 8:16 PM

Congrats on the win, Michael

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2010 at 7:46 PM

wow, very nicely done and congratulations, Michael.

Joyce Johnson

August 16, 2010 at 7:13 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 16, 2010 at 6:56 PM

Congrats to my White Knight on your winning poem in Paula's contest .. words to ponder my friend.. enjoy your sweet success.. luv always "Sweetheart".... from Italy ...caio..luv..

Wilma Neels

August 15, 2010 at 11:37 AM

Great entry Michael, I just had to smile while reading it, always Wilma Ps: all the best for the contest :)

Faleshia Murphy

August 15, 2010 at 10:42 AM

very nice good luck in the contest thanks so much for your support you have a great heart don't allow it to be broken best wishes to you have a great weekend faleshia