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Broken Dreams

A silent scream
A dream
Shattered
Battered
Splattered
Across the
Pavement.
Enslavement
To the heart
Broken in two
Broken anew
As I wander
Through the fog
Invisible
Unseen
Unclean
In this 
Dirty
World.
Curled
Up in a ball
Standing small
Waiting
Baiting
The final 
Destruction
Obstruction
To my happy
Destiny

I feel empty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/13/2010 12:27:00 PM
Aaaah, He's Back And Just As Brilliant As Ever ... Your Style Of Concise, Pinpointed Words Are Uniquely You ...Missed You Kiddo ... MoonBee
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Date: 3/5/2010 3:57:00 PM
True so true, sounds like a broken dream. I love the way you posted your poem .Enjoyed.
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Date: 3/5/2010 9:47:00 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Gareth. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2010 3:37:00 PM
Painting a sad and tragic image, well done. Thanks for sharing.
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