Broken Down

A lifeless body laid face down
on the back alley wet sidewalk.
This time of night no ones around
especially now at three o’clock.
I’m here because my carbroke down
Otherwise I wouldn’t be found dead
in this place. I hail from uptown.
Here, downtown, murder is widespread
Someone is always getting killed:
Prostitutes, druggies and the like
Thinking about it gives me chills.
Man! I wish I had my road bike
I’d flee this jungle battlefield.
For now, better keep my eyes peeled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today Joshep. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Nice thoughts on broken down personfying a lifeless body, joseph
Sweetheart Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 10:13 PM
A visual portrait in words Joshep... a truly big picture u paint for us to view.. enjoyed your creativity tonight with luv..
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