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Broken Down

A lifeless body laid face down on the back alley wet sidewalk. This time of night no ones around especially now at three o’clock. I’m here because my carbroke down Otherwise I wouldn’t be found dead in this place. I hail from uptown. Here, downtown, murder is widespread Someone is always getting killed: Prostitutes, druggies and the like Thinking about it gives me chills. Man! I wish I had my road bike I’d flee this jungle battlefield. For now, better keep my eyes peeled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 10:17:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today Joshep. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:02:00 AM
Nice thoughts on broken down personfying a lifeless body, joseph
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:13:00 PM
A visual portrait in words Joshep... a truly big picture u paint for us to view.. enjoyed your creativity tonight with luv..
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