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Broken Dolls

Broken Dolls Broken dolls within crumbling walls Winds through ghettos whimper with decaying echoes A little girl mourns… "Mommy! Mommy! Can I have a baby dolly?" "My precious one. Money, we have none." A little girl mourns… Her cries are heard by the mimicking mockingbird Scattering sorrows throughout the morrows A little girl mourns… "Search the skies my little one, until the day is done, for in the clouds you will see a new baby dolly." A little girl mourns… Her tears eventually dry after searching the mourning sky Holding her mother's hands, she finally understands. A little girl mourns… "Mommy, I don’t need a dolly any more." "Why is that my little Angel?" "I would like to help my friend who has no mommy, little food and sleeps on the floor. ...and Mommy, her name is Rachel." Two little girls… Music by Paloma Faith - 'Broken Doll' Sept.28.2018 A Poem of Reaction Poetry Sponsored by: Julia Ward N/A for contest
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Ricci Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Good Morning Winged. Your very words tell why children are so special with pure hearts. I have no words for this beautiful entry. Your repetitive line of "a little girl mourns" was wonderfully utilized and expressed for it is strong and heard. Your title is marvelous. May this day find you well.
Mcferran Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Very touching, expertly penned piece! Well done, winged one! ;)
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 3:33 PM
So beautiful and heart-wrenching, WW! Janice
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:06 PM
beautifully riveting, WW... how you moved me, ohhh...huggs
Lane Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 7:35 AM
What depth of compassion you've exposed in this one, my benevolent warrior. Your sensitive heart radiates love through the eyes of an innocent child. As ever ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 5:20 AM
This poignant poem brought tears to my eyes because it is true. I can relate. Very beautifully expressed WW. : )
Sathasivam Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Excellent. Very moving write. Enjoyed reading it.
Rose  Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Yes . This definitely caused a reaction from me. No greater loss then the loss of childhood at such a young age. Wish I had two dollys, one for each precious girl. Gl in the contest,
Nicole Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Tender sigh. Your thoughts tug at the heart. Those that are in need, help others that are in need as well. You have expressed this emotion- this reality. I wish I could hold these two little girls. Hugs and Love, Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Very moving, WW. Superbly penned.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 3:14 AM
You soar with an aching reality of bereaved angelic children.. you dived into the hearts and minds with your gripping work and anchored one of the pains of human nature.. Your talent has many a taste and colour Winged Warrior! Brilliantly penned and rendered! to my FAV. list and a win.. My deepest regards. Soar with Beauty, Love and Light.. Be blessed always.
Vaso Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Very heart wrenching poem and so very well written! :)
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