Broken Chain

BROKEN CHAIN


Is a kite with broken strings
Like a doll's body that flings
Is a sour smile
Like a list in the lost file

Is a fractured promise
Like of Delilah's ironies
Is a promise that was made
Like of Judas' faith that fades.



     - liQuidEraser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 12:06 PM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
A   Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 10:41 PM
well done, N Yam, LINDA
Yam Ave Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 11:48 PM
awesome! thanks
A  Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 6:39 PM
that's a very deep write... love the last line... YOUNG AND RESTLESS-SKAT
Yam Ave Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 11:48 PM
thank you
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