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Broken Chain

BROKEN CHAIN Is a kite with broken strings Like a doll's body that flings Is a sour smile Like a list in the lost file Is a fractured promise Like of Delilah's ironies Is a promise that was made Like of Judas' faith that fades. - liQuidEraser

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Funom Makama

Date: 8/6/2016 12:06:00 PM

This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2016 10:41:00 PM

well done, N Yam, LINDA

Nozeuq Yam Ave
Date: 6/12/2016 11:48:00 PM

awesome! thanks

Skat A

Date: 6/9/2016 6:39:00 PM

that's a very deep write... love the last line... YOUNG AND RESTLESS-SKAT

Nozeuq Yam Ave
Date: 6/12/2016 11:48:00 PM

thank you