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Broken Bridge 1 And 2 - Haiku

Broken Bridge 1 And 2 – Haiku Broken Bridge 1 suspension bridge breaks jungle covers snapped, collapse people disappear Broken Bridge 2 too much suspense, tons rope gives way, bridge breaks in two girl trips, bonnet falls

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Date: 11/16/2014 11:14:00 AM
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/16/2014 12:47:00 PM
Hi Vassilis, Thank you. I appreciate it. With haiku, as you know, you have to tell a large story some times with so few words. This story was screaming to be a novel but I had to tame it and trim it down to a few lines here and a few lines there. Have a pleasant afternoon. Take care. Earl