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Broken Bleeding Heart

“ I eat every word, suspended, transfixed by you, I’m losing myself” quote from poem, Infatuated by me Sooty bitter ashes in my mouth the taste of our old love, dead another wave of pain hits me I weep, I look at photos of us, weep hear our songs, weep sadness engulfs every pore of me devastated, broken, oblivion ghosting through life imploded heart bleeds you don’t love me anymore I feel as if my spirit fled Why do I emote by my pretty little cuts give me mindful tears Entry Writing Challenge 1 July 2019 - Melancholy Placed Third Sponsor: Dear Heart Written 22/07/2019

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Date: 7/26/2019 10:36:00 AM
One can feel the emotion in this poignant write. Congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 7/28/2019 3:32:00 AM
thanks for reading Sandra
Date: 7/25/2019 8:31:00 AM
Lovely verses my friend...Congrats! on your fabulous win, Georgia...and welcome to the Soup train lol...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o)
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/28/2019 3:29:00 AM
Thanks for reading WW
Date: 7/24/2019 2:55:00 PM
Georgia, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent write - well done !
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/25/2019 4:51:00 AM
Hooray, thanks DH. I enjoyed the writing challenge, Georgia
Date: 7/24/2019 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations Georgia. Nicely written.
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/25/2019 4:49:00 AM
thanks Jeanne for your feedback
Date: 7/23/2019 1:41:00 PM
Well penned Georgia, good imagery and insightful thought, fine penning!
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/25/2019 4:49:00 AM
thank you for reading Gordon

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