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Broken Back

Broken Back

They use words like
Cold
And 
Crossing
Sighs
To describe something romanticised
 
Obscured verbs
In which to hide
To hide
Romanticised
The suffering
Without a name

It asks you not to worry
A vacant voice
Verbalised
Tears
She cried
Lies

Nomenclature of disheartening
Hope
Borrowed between shadows
Between hearts
Flowers
And chocolates

At peace
At last
Unburdened
Released
Love
Child

Romanticised
To a field of waving poppies
Gently shook the rifles
And slow blood let
Picturesque

And before God
Such cruelty breathes animate
Stand
Brave
Courageous
Fool

Dancing in the rain
The paupers smile
Romanticised smile
Of a rich divide
To beggar belief

And it’s easy
So very easy
To explain away
How life
Is just made this way

They use words like
Freedom
Romanticised acceptance
Short words
Of description
To present an illusion
Of perfection

The good die young
It could happen to anyone
But only the good die young
Young
Children
Anyone

God
Space
Illusion
Nothing to prove
Romantic death
Of death
Who bides his time
In skeletal black cloth
And bargains away
In celluloid
The faces we can’t forget
Those who told us
We would never regret
Anything

The break scape
The big escape
A monumental world of landscape
And freedom
Beyond mountains
Beyond worlds
Beyond words
Romanticised

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/10/2009 5:25:00 PM
I always wonder if it's just here in the U.S., or is there fabricated reality everywhere? I wonder how many people are astute and aware of the veil we wear through which to see everything translucent and falsely? Well the machine wouldn't thrive and prosper without complacent cowed consumer-ites to feed into the wood chipper, now would it? Outstanding write and a well deserved feature. Right on, Write on!! Steve
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:44:00 PM
Dear Colin,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM " Broken Back " well crafted well deserved ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:00:00 AM
Colin, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:50:00 AM
Well worded poem, congrats on being featured, James
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:07:00 PM
long, but well worth any ones time. this was very well crafted in poetic style. artfull with something to say and you said it eliquently you get an A+ my friend. and congrads on making the list. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 5/5/2009 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/5/2009 10:17:00 AM
Nice poem made for a very enjoyable read. Congratulations on being featured
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Date: 5/5/2009 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/5/2009 4:06:00 AM
What is this about?
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:11:00 AM
Colin, Being a cloud watcher, I noticed that your poem looks a bit like a longitudinal Bisection of a spine... It sort of fits "Broken Back" Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations Colin on being featrured again with another strongly worded poem, "Broken Back." Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:38:00 AM
Warmest congrats dear Colin on another featured write! Always brilliant, always worth the read and more! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:07:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. Best wishes with your writing. Mine is also featured. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:06:00 PM
Another amazing write from you Colin...Congratulations and well deserving being among the featured works this week! ~ Carrie
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