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Broken Back

Broken Back They use words like Cold And Crossing Sighs To describe something romanticised Obscured verbs In which to hide To hide Romanticised The suffering Without a name It asks you not to worry A vacant voice Verbalised Tears She cried Lies Nomenclature of disheartening Hope Borrowed between shadows Between hearts Flowers And chocolates At peace At last Unburdened Released Love Child Romanticised To a field of waving poppies Gently shook the rifles And slow blood let Picturesque And before God Such cruelty breathes animate Stand Brave Courageous Fool Dancing in the rain The paupers smile Romanticised smile Of a rich divide To beggar belief And it’s easy So very easy To explain away How life Is just made this way They use words like Freedom Romanticised acceptance Short words Of description To present an illusion Of perfection The good die young It could happen to anyone But only the good die young Young Children Anyone God Space Illusion Nothing to prove Romantic death Of death Who bides his time In skeletal black cloth And bargains away In celluloid The faces we can’t forget Those who told us We would never regret Anything The break scape The big escape A monumental world of landscape And freedom Beyond mountains Beyond worlds Beyond words Romanticised

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Date: 5/10/2009 5:25:00 PM
I always wonder if it's just here in the U.S., or is there fabricated reality everywhere? I wonder how many people are astute and aware of the veil we wear through which to see everything translucent and falsely? Well the machine wouldn't thrive and prosper without complacent cowed consumer-ites to feed into the wood chipper, now would it? Outstanding write and a well deserved feature. Right on, Write on!! Steve
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:44:00 PM
Dear Colin,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM " Broken Back " well crafted well deserved ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:00:00 AM
Colin, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:50:00 AM
Well worded poem, congrats on being featured, James
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:07:00 PM
long, but well worth any ones time. this was very well crafted in poetic style. artfull with something to say and you said it eliquently you get an A+ my friend. and congrads on making the list. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 5/5/2009 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/5/2009 10:17:00 AM
Nice poem made for a very enjoyable read. Congratulations on being featured
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Date: 5/5/2009 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/5/2009 4:06:00 AM
What is this about?
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:11:00 AM
Colin, Being a cloud watcher, I noticed that your poem looks a bit like a longitudinal Bisection of a spine... It sort of fits "Broken Back" Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations Colin on being featrured again with another strongly worded poem, "Broken Back." Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:38:00 AM
Warmest congrats dear Colin on another featured write! Always brilliant, always worth the read and more! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:07:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/3/2009 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. Best wishes with your writing. Mine is also featured. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:06:00 PM
Another amazing write from you Colin...Congratulations and well deserving being among the featured works this week! ~ Carrie
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