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Broken Arrow

A juicy girl named Cherry Bing Discovered Cupid's ding-a-ling It was too small No good at all She wasn't doing anything!

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/2/2020 3:54:00 AM

This one really cracked me up Rico! I laughed so much. Thank you for the laughter! Do you remember that old song My ding a ling by Chuck Berry? My husband told me about it years ago. Here is the link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UaEC-lWSlmI

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/2/2020 2:29:00 PM

My late wife was a Chuck Berry fan, so I heard it before! Aloha! Rico

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/2/2020 2:03:00 AM

Rico, pretty naughty. You seem to be expert in limericks. Pl. write for my limerick contest too. Best. Mohan

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/2/2020 2:35:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, but I leave contests to contestants. Aloha! Rico

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2020 2:03:00 PM

hahahah.... naughty! Great flow though.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/2/2020 2:29:00 PM

It did not work; how could it flow? Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/1/2020 1:56:00 PM

HA HA HA HA HA HA, and, HA HA HA ;),

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/2/2020 2:33:00 PM

Anyone able to laugh at a broken arrow has a great sense of humour! Aloha! Rico

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/1/2020 1:32:00 PM

i'll bet you have fun writing these, rico! your readership enjoys your efforts, too...

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/1/2020 1:48:00 PM

It is a challenge to take this modern world seriously! Thank you for your continued support! Aloha! Rico