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Broken Arrow

A juicy girl named Cherry Bing
Discovered Cupid's ding-a-ling
It was too small
No good at all
She wasn't doing anything!

Copyright © Rico Leffanta | Year Posted 2020

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Connie Marcum Wong

June 2, 2020 at 3:54 AM

This one really cracked me up Rico! I laughed so much. Thank you for the laughter! Do you remember that old song My ding a ling by Chuck Berry? My husband told me about it years ago. Here is the link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UaEC-lWSlmI

June 2, 2020 at 2:29 PM

My late wife was a Chuck Berry fan, so I heard it before! Aloha! Rico

June 2, 2020 at 2:03 AM

Rico, pretty naughty. You seem to be expert in limericks. Pl. write for my limerick contest too. Best. Mohan

June 2, 2020 at 2:35 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, but I leave contests to contestants. Aloha! Rico

June 1, 2020 at 2:03 PM

hahahah.... naughty! Great flow though.

June 2, 2020 at 2:29 PM

It did not work; how could it flow? Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 1, 2020 at 1:56 PM

HA HA HA HA HA HA, and, HA HA HA ;),

June 2, 2020 at 2:33 PM

Anyone able to laugh at a broken arrow has a great sense of humour! Aloha! Rico

June 1, 2020 at 1:32 PM

i'll bet you have fun writing these, rico! your readership enjoys your efforts, too...

June 1, 2020 at 1:48 PM

It is a challenge to take this modern world seriously! Thank you for your continued support! Aloha! Rico

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