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poem submitted to "This or That, Vol. 30," poetry contest, Edward Ibeh, sponsor, Auigust 7, 2026

BROKEN ANTENNA

The static rises~  
not as sound,  
but as a pale geometry  
folding itself across my mind~  
a lattice of bright interference,  
a trembling veil  
where meaning dissolves  
into a thousand flickering fragments.

I move through it  
like a figure drawn in chalk,  
blurred at the edges,  
half-erased by the world’s  
restless shimmer.  
Every step fractures  
into a scatter of white noise,  
as if the ground itself  
cannot decide  
what it wants to be.

The signal~  
the one I seek,  
the one that should thread  
through the static  
like a single clear line~  
remains absent.  
Not silent,  
but absent,  
as though Divinity  
has folded itself  
into a dimension  
my soul cannot reach.

I lift my thoughts  
like antennas,  
broken, thin and trembling,  
hoping to catch  
even the faintest pulse  
of the Unseen.  
But the static thickens,  
becoming a bright fog  
of unmade meanings,  
a shimmering illusion  
that vibrates  
where truth should be.

In this white-noise maze,  
I am both seeker  
and lost signal~  
a wandering frequency  
searching for the point  
where the noise will break,  
where the veil will thin,  
where the Unseen  
will finally answer  
with light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 10:13 PM
There is a fog veiling our understanding and our sight. It is so frustrating that we are not able to get the right signal as our antenna is broken. Still we can strive to retrieve the lost signal when truth will finally unveil before us. A very profound poem. I am sure this will be placed as a top winner. All the best dear Sara.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:06 AM
Beautiful wording for broken antennas.
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