Broken Angel

With her head held low
I can see her pain within
Her broken wings lay shattered
She suffers with your sin

She has tried to help you
And lead you drom temptation
This one last sin
To which there is no redemption

It's not just your soul that has gone
You've taken her's as well
Learn to love again
Believe in yourself and leave your hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 1:49 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:29 PM
SHARON, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
George   Avatar
August 15, 2008 at 11:40 PM
Dear Sharon, This excellent personification has won an honorable mention in my contest. Please forward your mailing address to: [email protected] and I will send your certificate of poetic excellence from MemorElaine Publishing House. CONGRATULATIONS! Love and best wishes, lainie
Winter Avatar
August 15, 2008 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your Honorable Mention in Elaine's Personification contest. Well done. Love, Shar
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