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Wind blows today to the past Time goes on by way to fast Trying to find a love that will last Put my heart on the line Don't think I can do it one more time Why must I subject myself to the pain I just keep getting left out in the rain Can't fix how her heart feels Guess I'm stuck in the mud spinning wheels They say time heals a broken heart But what can you do If your heart just won't part Made a commitment for life Now I'm looking at a woman who doesn't resemble my wife Time can change a persons face But memories it can't erase How I wish we could go back Back to the days when our love was raw and pure Spending the rest of our days together was for sure Now we have grown apart I keep holding on for a new start I'm left in the mist of the storm Trying to mend a broken heart that's been torn Joshua Charleston Any Sad Poem by Broken Wing 10/26/2015

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Date: 11/4/2015 12:17:00 AM
Congrats on this moving, wistful piece, full of longing and regret. Well done, Joshua. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:04:00 PM
Joshua, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Joshua Charleston
Date: 11/3/2015 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Skat. This is such a creative site and with helpful and supportive members.
Date: 11/3/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Dr. And Silent One.
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:04:00 AM
Real sad Joshua.. Congrats on superb win! Ah there I see that u r new to the soup.. warm welcome.. keep your words flowing my friend!
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Date: 10/26/2015 8:14:00 PM
Joshua, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/26/2015 5:51:00 PM
Hi Joshua, thanks for the HELLO. :) Enjoying this poem once again, time and memories are heartbreaking once it's been separated. Love SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 4:10:00 PM
Joshua, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 11:33:00 AM
this is sad. but it's beautiful.
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Date: 10/26/2015 11:22:00 AM
i feel it.
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