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Broken

Blacks, reds, and blues are the hues left from you. oooh, why did you hurt me so damn bad? why did i put so much power in you? You hurt me from the inside out. Made me feel lesser than what i am. Degraded me, shamed me i swear you hated me...But you say that was love, if that was love i could live without it. Hurt me so bad i felt as if i could no longer stand! You took my strength, you took my beauty, you even got your hands on my pride, everything that made me you used to break me. You used me and abused me physically and emotionally... You had such a powerful hold on me. You killed me and brought me back to life just so you could hurt me again... I hated you, but i hated me more for allowing you to play on my emotions and weakness. You gave my own personal hell on earth, abused neglected and broken is how you left me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/2/2011 6:24:00 PM
a deep and good last line, a touchy write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:29:00 AM
so sorry for the pain. so real i could feel.
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:42:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Micheylle. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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