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Broken

 
Oh, shattered and broken after my husband's accidental death! My life was darkness and tears, I was in a pit of pain with high walls, and no hope- I lost my job and was collecting- welfare humiliated- I moved back home with Mom and Dad He died way too soon after the babies death! I wanted to be strong. I looked deep into my soul, and found nothing- even wished to end my life- to break free of the imprisonment. I wanted to cast off the cloak of death! Oh, just to end the captivity! And I dreamt of the sea, that blue chasm, always struggling, never surrendering seeking its path. And I listened and found deep inside of me a little bird singing. And she was growing stronger. Her song mighty, full of hope and courage. Then, one day she broke free! And a broken wing- did not hold her back and she just flew and flew- _________________________ April 19, 2017 (Repost) Poetry/Verse/Broken Copyright Protected, ID 04-1518-120-19 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France (Written for a PS contest, NA, Judged in 2017) Submitted into the Standard contest, Second Chance sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/18/2023 Honorable Mention
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. WOW!!! What a lovely yet sad story/write. Your little bird needed to grow strong so you could become a great writer for all to read. You are a blessings to many. Life is not always easy/fair. One day we will know why. Here is a hug, catch it. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2023 12:14:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the visit, nice comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/17/2023 12:20:00 AM
You paint an abyss that touches the heart and the bravery to hold on until the very air sustains you. Elizabeth
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2023 12:15:00 PM
Elizabeth, thank you so much for the visit, and lovely comment, Constance
Date: 1/16/2023 7:26:00 PM
'Hope IS the thing with feathers... that singest in the darkest storms...' Emily D. and you are right!! ~ Mr. Tweetie
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2023 12:15:00 PM
Gershon, thank you so much for the visit, lovely comment, Constance
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