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                         September 17, 2025, entered in Charles Messina's Fourtle Contest, placed 1st

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Broke Bloke CM




His stash was spent.
No cash for rent!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Excellent and the title as well. Congratulations
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:58 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Poteet Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 12:37 PM
neat fourtle/footle. Well-done, Congrats.
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:57 PM
Thanks so much, Reason. Janice
Miller Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:47 AM
Excellent, congratulations
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Thanks so much, Terry. Janice
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:47 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Excellent! Congrats on top win!
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
Messina Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:29 AM
LOL- Loved this, Janice. Congratulations on your top win!
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Charles, thanks SO much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 12:37 PM
This reads like so many people who do this all the time. I enjoyed reading it. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 2:08 PM
Thanks a million, Sara. Janice
Velasco Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Short, sharp, and delightfully witty, Janice, your two lines pack a punch and capture the struggle with perfect economy.
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Rowena, I am so thrilled with your response to my poem! Janice
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:56 AM
- Excellent, Janice ... this one is a winner :) - hugs
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 2:06 PM
Thanks a million, Anne-Lise! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Now THAT is how to do it. Best one I have seen
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 9:19 PM
Andrea, you have made me grin from ear to ear. Thank you so much! Janice
Crandall Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Good one! I've been there!
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 8:55 PM
Thanks so much, David. Janice
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