I used the Quintain form.
Broiled white flakey fish served on a platter Relish placed in a small bowl on the side Optimum pleasant surroundings matter Inviting if you, my love, still abide Loving was what mattered now denied Every trip to this grill so much flatter Downright sad I'd say, death, my spirit tried Cod on the menu without thick batter Optimal addition to menu applied D elight would come once more to me inside
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