Bristling Beach Days


water's filament beneath, footprints in either sand or snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Croft Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 2:28 AM
Interesting comparison of snow and sand
Fowler Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 6:31 AM
Nice imagery in so few words - love it Paige :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 9:58 PM
Beautiful contrast in your monoku. Wish I could see snow in Malta. Only the occasional hail that destroys.
Jones Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 1:18 AM
Like the imagery!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 5:30 PM
snow on a beach! well done
Kauffman Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Wonderfully crafted picture that encompasses every season at the beach! Blessings, Paige!
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2026 at 12:17 AM
Very cool, Paige.
Godwin Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 1:16 PM
I think you painted my FIRST EVER imagined view of snow on a beach. Well done, Paige
Poet Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Enchanting and masterfully crafted. Wishing you joy and the warmth of love, dear Paige.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 9:20 PM
What a change! I like this!
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