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Bringouttheman

Your faith Was faithful As faithfulness And your trust Was trustworthy As reliable As noble You were so genuine You bring out The man in me Your words Are now my commands All your teachings Are coming back In my mind It’s like magic The more I think About you The more I feel Your presence You just bring out The man in me And that the man You rose with pride Fun, loving and caring I mean The man with values Limited by norms I just can’t Compromise my principles As they were laid On top of the strong foundation That was laid by love And protected through love As love was your mission That was unconditional Through the tests of life You bring out the man in me The very best being With an ultimate potential To change things And better the lives You were my first teacher Before my primary teacher Who guided my footsteps? To control my language While clearing my mind with just You brought out The man in me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/19/2016 7:36:00 PM
S S.,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 8/20/2015 12:49:00 AM
Nice! Like how you cut your lines.. powerful!~Olive eloisa =')
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:36:00 AM
... and it sounds like that man is fully committed - keep it up, brother ;)
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